Site review

[cockhungryhoes]

I was wanting some of you to take a look at this site http://www.cockhungryhoes.com and give it a review. I have not converted as I was hoping. Please give me some feed back. Maybe some pointers on how I could improve things.

Thanks
You guys are great.

[pigbait75]

your sending all your traffic to better link lists then your own. one click and im in someone else's list and theres more there. thats just my opinion your giving these other lists your sales.
and you could probably use more text on your page.
at least thats what im always told here.

[cockhungryhoes]

Thats good advice. Thanks I think I feel into the noobie trap of just generating traffic. I went back and looked. I see your right I need to work them through my content more.

Thanks...