Free Site Review

Jesse U. · 2007-08-28, 04:51 PM

Can you please check out my 1st Free Site.

http://colesporn.com/fs/feetfiles/darenzia/082707_01/

Please let me know what you think.

Thanks.

Lemmy · 2007-08-28, 06:28 PM

There's room for some improvement.

The huge pic on your index is blind. You only have 3 recips. Your enter link is above the recips. I don't pretend to know the foot fetish niche very well, nor do I believe in giving away too much for free, but your galleries need some more nudity to qualify as porn.

On the bright side your pics are nice and big, if the model only could show some skin.

Not bad for a first attempt. Read the rules and have another go, the fixes are easy. Good luck!

japamor · 2007-08-28, 06:35 PM

Hi Jesse U

Warning Page
You should use more recips on your warning page - as many as 15 or so is acceptable. My LL and most others won't accept below 6.
Your banners should have sales text above and below them. Text sells better than banners and banners on their own get ignored by most surfers.
Your Enter link should be below the recips - otherwise its an automatic refusal at most LL's.

Main Page
You need to use a lot more sales text.This is your main selling page and you should try to hit the surfers here. Just a couple of identical banners doesn't cut it at all. Drop a banner and replace it with text. If you can't think of sales text take a look at the Sponsor's tour - you should get lots of ideas.

Galleries
Ten pics will get you refused at Greenie's LL - its 12 min per gallery.
Again you've used the same banner. You must get more variety into your sales pitch.

Don't be put off. For a first site you've done very well. The basic layout is good and its a nice clean design. Change the points I've mentioned and let's have another look.

tigermom · 2007-08-29, 01:41 AM

Good advice above. Just to add -

Warning page - your bottom banner doesn't appear to be linked to anything.

The "Back" button on your galleries, IMO should go back to the main page, not to the warning page, and as been said above, put more heart into trying to sell the paysite on the main page - more clickable text and not repeating banners.

I would also suggest a graphic header, not just text - makes the site look a bit more professional and I think reviewers like that.

spacemanspiff · 2007-08-29, 09:07 AM

You also need to move your enter link below the recip table. Most LLs will reject for that.

Jesse U. · 2007-08-29, 04:54 PM

Thanks for all your suggestions, I really appreciate it. I went ahead and made all the corrections... I think.

Check it out please

http://colesporn.com/fs/feetfiles/da..._01/index.html

bDok · 2007-08-29, 06:43 PM

too many links out on the page.

so many of your problems would be noticed on your part if you were to read just the rules on 99% of the link list pages. just my 2cents.

That said. You are making progress.

Cheers,
B

Porn Junkie · 2007-08-30, 01:30 AM

I was just about to mention what bDok said. I don't really know of any LL that allows more than 3 outbound links per page and your warning page has around 7ish.

Don't link "Feet Files.com" text. It's unnecessary. Best to have thought out text links that grab the surfer instead of spreading it out.

This is just me though, but I prefer hand made text recips. They fit better into the style of the site. But thats just my opinion and personal taste.

If your gonna use a banner and text links, put the text below the banner.

Having an exit link out to google is not necessary. Don't give your surfers the option to leave without sending them to somewhere of importance to you. I send mine to a link for a partner account I have but you can send yours to a mainstream project you have or something similar.

One last thing that struck me and it was already mentioned. The banner image is too big and shouldn't link out. Take that image, shrink it down, import it into photoshop and add some nice text to it and make it a graphical header. Will look more professional and clean that way.

japamor · 2007-08-30, 03:59 AM

That's a big improvement Jesse U. You're definitely on the right lines.

One small point about your Recips - try changing your Table Cell Padding to about 5 instead of 0 - it'll stop it looking so cluttered.

Jesse U. · 2007-08-30, 05:49 PM

I really appreciate all your help everyone. Thanks.

2007-08-28, 04:51 PM	#1
Jesse U. Rock stars ... is there anything they don't know? Join Date: Feb 2007 Posts: 19	Free Site Review Can you please check out my 1st Free Site. http://colesporn.com/fs/feetfiles/darenzia/082707_01/ Please let me know what you think. Thanks.

2007-08-28, 06:28 PM	#2
Lemmy You can now put whatever you want in this space :) Join Date: Sep 2004 Location: Next door to a kid with a moped. Posts: 1,492	There's room for some improvement. The huge pic on your index is blind. You only have 3 recips. Your enter link is above the recips. I don't pretend to know the foot fetish niche very well, nor do I believe in giving away too much for free, but your galleries need some more nudity to qualify as porn. On the bright side your pics are nice and big, if the model only could show some skin. Not bad for a first attempt. Read the rules and have another go, the fixes are easy. Good luck! __________________ BUY MY PORNSITES! Last edited by Lemmy; 2007-08-28 at 06:52 PM..

2007-08-28, 06:35 PM	#3
japamor I Love Turkish Delight, they're very moreish. Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: UK Posts: 578	Hi Jesse U Warning Page You should use more recips on your warning page - as many as 15 or so is acceptable. My LL and most others won't accept below 6. Your banners should have sales text above and below them. Text sells better than banners and banners on their own get ignored by most surfers. Your Enter link should be below the recips - otherwise its an automatic refusal at most LL's. Main Page You need to use a lot more sales text.This is your main selling page and you should try to hit the surfers here. Just a couple of identical banners doesn't cut it at all. Drop a banner and replace it with text. If you can't think of sales text take a look at the Sponsor's tour - you should get lots of ideas. Galleries Ten pics will get you refused at Greenie's LL - its 12 min per gallery. Again you've used the same banner. You must get more variety into your sales pitch. Don't be put off. For a first site you've done very well. The basic layout is good and its a nice clean design. Change the points I've mentioned and let's have another look. __________________

2007-08-29, 01:41 AM	#4
tigermom You can now put whatever you want in this space :) Join Date: Dec 2005 Posts: 893	Good advice above. Just to add - Warning page - your bottom banner doesn't appear to be linked to anything. The "Back" button on your galleries, IMO should go back to the main page, not to the warning page, and as been said above, put more heart into trying to sell the paysite on the main page - more clickable text and not repeating banners. I would also suggest a graphic header, not just text - makes the site look a bit more professional and I think reviewers like that. __________________ XLEF

2007-08-29, 09:07 AM	#5
spacemanspiff Where there's a will, I want to be in it. Join Date: Aug 2003 Location: Looz-e-anna Posts: 1,015	You also need to move your enter link below the recip table. Most LLs will reject for that. __________________ Submit your free sites to Free Sex Pics

2007-08-29, 04:54 PM	#6
Jesse U. Rock stars ... is there anything they don't know? Join Date: Feb 2007 Posts: 19	Thanks Everyone Thanks for all your suggestions, I really appreciate it. I went ahead and made all the corrections... I think. Check it out please http://colesporn.com/fs/feetfiles/da..._01/index.html

2007-08-29, 06:43 PM	#7
bDok bang bang Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: SD/OC/LA Posts: 3,241	too many links out on the page. so many of your problems would be noticed on your part if you were to read just the rules on 99% of the link list pages. just my 2cents. That said. You are making progress. Cheers, B

2007-08-30, 01:30 AM	#8
Porn Junkie I've always wondered if there was a god. And now I know there is -- and it's me Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: Canada Eh! Posts: 325	I was just about to mention what bDok said. I don't really know of any LL that allows more than 3 outbound links per page and your warning page has around 7ish. Don't link "Feet Files.com" text. It's unnecessary. Best to have thought out text links that grab the surfer instead of spreading it out. This is just me though, but I prefer hand made text recips. They fit better into the style of the site. But thats just my opinion and personal taste. If your gonna use a banner and text links, put the text below the banner. Having an exit link out to google is not necessary. Don't give your surfers the option to leave without sending them to somewhere of importance to you. I send mine to a link for a partner account I have but you can send yours to a mainstream project you have or something similar. One last thing that struck me and it was already mentioned. The banner image is too big and shouldn't link out. Take that image, shrink it down, import it into photoshop and add some nice text to it and make it a graphical header. Will look more professional and clean that way. __________________ EzAngels EzLinks - Submit here

2007-08-30, 03:59 AM	#9
japamor I Love Turkish Delight, they're very moreish. Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: UK Posts: 578	That's a big improvement Jesse U. You're definitely on the right lines. One small point about your Recips - try changing your Table Cell Padding to about 5 instead of 0 - it'll stop it looking so cluttered. __________________

2007-08-30, 05:49 PM	#10
Jesse U. Rock stars ... is there anything they don't know? Join Date: Feb 2007 Posts: 19	Thanks Again I really appreciate all your help everyone. Thanks.