is there something I'm doing wrong?

pood · 2004-09-03, 02:23 PM

argh, been submitting like crazy, trying 1 freesite a day, but I just can't seem to ge the traffic or hte sells ;(

review these sites for me if you guys can

http://www.analniche.com/double_team_anal
http://www.analniche.com/2v1_anal/

am I writing too much text? perhaps the layout isnt good?

shorten the text? do users even read the text lol?

is it hte content, or maybe just the sponser ;(

this one I will be submitting in the next hour

http://www.analniche.com/anal_teen_lovers/

MadMax · 2004-09-03, 02:53 PM

Well, here's what I see on http://www.analniche.com/double_team_anal and my opinion

1) You're promoting Anal, which is a pretty well saturated niche. This makes any single anal site more likely to have trouble with conversions. This doesn't kill you, but it means you have stiffer competition.

2) The thumbs and full size pics are a bit fuzzy with bad lighting, and are probably screen-caps from video. This (and the sponsor logo on the pics) indicate to me that this is probably sponsor content, and not particularly good sponsor content at that.

3) The sales text is borderline excessive, IMO, and not very easy on the eyes. All that bold text in a block tends to run together. Make your point with fewer words, and what you write is more likely to get read.

4) The phrase "eating their own shit off of dicks after they've been up their ass" is questionable sales material even to my tastes, and I'm one sick fuck in the first place. If you're going to promote standard Anal, you may want to promote a site that's not so much on the "extreme" end of anal.

These are just my opinions, and you might get more specific advice from someone who actively promotes a lot of anal sites.

Horny Dude · 2004-09-03, 08:05 PM

How many LL do you submit too? I always put alot of text not for the surfer, but for the SE to grab up. The content of your site could be better, most of the time LL will not list you if you use sponsor content just because everyone has prob. seen it already else where!

finnbear · 2004-09-03, 11:26 PM

I am not a reviewer, but all those sites looks like each other. Try build other templates too. LLs don't want to list same site every day.

Also you have lots of text all linked and that is hard to read. You also use black as link color, and IMHO black and white are text colors, not link colors. Using blue and red (as for an example) as link colors maybe be a bore but surfers see them as link colors and click more. Also if you have black as bgcolor yellow is perfect link color. In BDSM sites with black bgcolor I recommend red as link color. Also I don't understand why some webmasters use red links in blue bg and blue links in black bg. Very hard to read.

Think about using graphics for logo, enter, gallery and back links. They make your site more original, and while enter link loads surfer may see your ads first. Doing graphics is not so difficult as you may think, there is many programs that are easy to use. I use PhotoImpact and PhotoShop. First one is cheap, other one is expensive as hell, but I have light version I got with video edit software.

I don't know if you're a newbie or not (I started 1998 and I feel like newbie most mornings still) so don't get mad from my opinions, they are just something I wrote at 6am in a horrible flu I got from my wife after some mugs of hot water, sugar and vodka.

pood · 2004-09-04, 03:20 AM

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Originally posted by finnbear
I am not a reviewer, but all those sites looks like each other. Try build other templates too. LLs don't want to list same site every day.

Also you have lots of text all linked and that is hard to read. You also use black as link color, and IMHO black and white are text colors, not link colors. Using blue and red (as for an example) as link colors maybe be a bore but surfers see them as link colors and click more. Also if you have black as bgcolor yellow is perfect link color. In BDSM sites with black bgcolor I recommend red as link color. Also I don't understand why some webmasters use red links in blue bg and blue links in black bg. Very hard to read.

Think about using graphics for logo, enter, gallery and back links. They make your site more original, and while enter link loads surfer may see your ads first. Doing graphics is not so difficult as you may think, there is many programs that are easy to use. I use PhotoImpact and PhotoShop. First one is cheap, other one is expensive as hell, but I have light version I got with video edit software.

I don't know if you're a newbie or not (I started 1998 and I feel like newbie most mornings still) so don't get mad from my opinions, they are just something I wrote at 6am in a horrible flu I got from my wife after some mugs of hot water, sugar and vodka.

i'm trying to make my site load faster, thats why i never bother photoshoping, though I could and have to years.

Well, most LL accept me I submit to about 120. Yeah, after that last site, I'm changing layouts soon. I just been buidling different color schemes.

well, I'm gonna do a whole overhaul for my next layout. More large text, less essays, heh. I'll jazz up the color as well, been using mostly muted colors

2004-09-03, 02:23 PM	#1
pood Just because I don't care doesn't mean I don't understand! Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: Seattle Posts: 99	is there something I'm doing wrong? argh, been submitting like crazy, trying 1 freesite a day, but I just can't seem to ge the traffic or hte sells ;( review these sites for me if you guys can http://www.analniche.com/double_team_anal http://www.analniche.com/2v1_anal/ am I writing too much text? perhaps the layout isnt good? shorten the text? do users even read the text lol? is it hte content, or maybe just the sponser ;( this one I will be submitting in the next hour http://www.analniche.com/anal_teen_lovers/

2004-09-03, 08:05 PM	#3
Horny Dude The only guys who wear Hawaiian shirts are gay guys and big fat party animals Join Date: Sep 2003 Location: San Diego Posts: 172	How many LL do you submit too? I always put alot of text not for the surfer, but for the SE to grab up. The content of your site could be better, most of the time LL will not list you if you use sponsor content just because everyone has prob. seen it already else where! __________________ Submit to my link list!

2004-09-03, 11:26 PM	#4
finnbear You can now put whatever you want in this space :) Join Date: Aug 2003 Location: Finland Posts: 534	I am not a reviewer, but all those sites looks like each other. Try build other templates too. LLs don't want to list same site every day. Also you have lots of text all linked and that is hard to read. You also use black as link color, and IMHO black and white are text colors, not link colors. Using blue and red (as for an example) as link colors maybe be a bore but surfers see them as link colors and click more. Also if you have black as bgcolor yellow is perfect link color. In BDSM sites with black bgcolor I recommend red as link color. Also I don't understand why some webmasters use red links in blue bg and blue links in black bg. Very hard to read. Think about using graphics for logo, enter, gallery and back links. They make your site more original, and while enter link loads surfer may see your ads first. Doing graphics is not so difficult as you may think, there is many programs that are easy to use. I use PhotoImpact and PhotoShop. First one is cheap, other one is expensive as hell, but I have light version I got with video edit software. I don't know if you're a newbie or not (I started 1998 and I feel like newbie most mornings still) so don't get mad from my opinions, they are just something I wrote at 6am in a horrible flu I got from my wife after some mugs of hot water, sugar and vodka. __________________ My free porn sites

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2004-09-03, 02:53 PM	#2
MadMax "Without evil there can be no good, so it must be good to be evil sometimes" ~ Satan Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: Motor City, baby, where carjacking was invented! Now GIMME THOSE SHOES! Posts: 2,385	Well, here's what I see on http://www.analniche.com/double_team_anal and my opinion 1) You're promoting Anal, which is a pretty well saturated niche. This makes any single anal site more likely to have trouble with conversions. This doesn't kill you, but it means you have stiffer competition. 2) The thumbs and full size pics are a bit fuzzy with bad lighting, and are probably screen-caps from video. This (and the sponsor logo on the pics) indicate to me that this is probably sponsor content, and not particularly good sponsor content at that. 3) The sales text is borderline excessive, IMO, and not very easy on the eyes. All that bold text in a block tends to run together. Make your point with fewer words, and what you write is more likely to get read. 4) The phrase "eating their own shit off of dicks after they've been up their ass" is questionable sales material even to my tastes, and I'm one sick fuck in the first place. If you're going to promote standard Anal, you may want to promote a site that's not so much on the "extreme" end of anal. These are just my opinions, and you might get more specific advice from someone who actively promotes a lot of anal sites.