Okay, give it to me.

[ronnie]

My latest blog pretty much finished besides a few tweaks and a little added to the layout.

Good? Bad? Ugly?

Prostitute Blog

ronnie

[Rorschach]

sounds like a man wrote it

[Bill]

I like it.

I mean, the writing is not _real_ beliveable, but at least you are actually doing some writing, which makes it stand out, and should of course make it look good to the spiders.

Spiders can't read, they can only count.

A big improvement over the schlock gallery blogs, which won't get the same amount of spider's love.

[ronnie]

Originally Posted by Rorschach

sounds like a man wrote it

Really? Why do you say that, I am curious. Good to get outside opinions.

Actually a women wrote it, well, 99% of it. Maybe she was trying to hard to sell porn on it?

It's not real believable?

Keep the opinions coming..

ronnie

[Bill]

There have been a couple of fairly famous blogs written by (supposedly) real prostitutes.

None of those blogs praise customers big cocks, or sex toys, or lesbian sex sessions.

Usually they are more about vaginitis and money and how fucked up the customers are.

Thus, not believeable.

Don't know many prostitutes, know some strippers. Strippers HATE the customers with a passion. So, drawing the comparison, I find a prostitute who doesn't hate the customers not beleivable.

However, the customers think the strippers LOVE them. Men, you see, are not very smart. So your prostitute blog will fool 98% of your visitors.

[Mr. Blue]

Good site, the only thing I would recommend...could you make it more conversational? Right now it almost seems more like a story site than a blog.

I read mostly tech blog, blah, lol, but I do read one porn blog. The thing that's appealing is this personal feel, personal touches, and a conversation with the viewer or the blog itself. At least this is what makes me read a blog. In some ways the blogs I like to read almost feel like someone's personal diary.

It feels like you start it off in the middle of the story. Example would be the "Hot Webcam Guys" entry...there's no foreplay to it...if you could something like a vinette of how she ended up at this webcam site. A story before the story...I dunno, you can say she's friends with one of the webcam guys, he sent a link to her in an email, she went to look at his first online show out of curiosity, etc, etc, etc. Jumping right to how she likes webcam guys, etc, just didn't feel natural.

[ronnie]

Thanks for the replies! It really is appreciated. Where's the rest of the bloggers? Or maybe they dont have good comments.. Like I said, good or bad, I want to hear it.

ronnie

[Ann Omness]

It looks decent to me. I'd list it. I don't think it's very believeable either, but we're all just jaded webmasters with an acute sense of spam. Horny surfers have an almost infinite capacity for belief.

[ronnie]

Originally Posted by Ann Omness

It looks decent to me. I'd list it. I don't think it's very believeable either, but we're all just jaded webmasters with an acute sense of spam. Horny surfers have an almost infinite capacity for belief.

Thank you. Ya, that seems to be the big problem, make it believable and still sell. And ya I agree, we could all be jaded, we know this guy did not shoot this girl or actually have sex with her, so it's harder, I think to believe anything. Guess traffic and time will tell...

ronnie