please critique my free site

sbl · 2006-02-22, 09:44 PM

Hi there, this is my first kick of the cat at making a free site, please give me your seasoned opinions.

http://springbreaklesbian.com/spring..._spring_break/

thnx

MrYum · 2006-02-22, 10:14 PM

Hey there Sbl

I'll take a shot at ya for kicking the cat

First off, your domain is listed as being for sale...that will cost you some listings.

Moving on to your site itself...

Entry page...looks pretty clean...perhaps a bit too clean actually. Get some ads on that page...you can have up to 3 outbound links...you'll want to use em. Your entry page is the first chance to make the sale...mmmm....sales

Main page...again, very clean. Also again, get some ads on the page. The link you do have at the bottom is a blind link. Here's a good reference to learn about blind links and how to avoid them.

http://www.greenguysboard.com/board/...ad.php?t=23441

Galleries...well, you got all 3 outbound sponsor links. But, they're all pretty blind...you'll definitely want to read that thread

Overall, a good first kick...a bit plain perhaps, but at least it's clean and a good starting point

sbl · 2006-02-22, 11:20 PM

LOL
Oops, looks like I got the idiom wrong! hehe

Great points, I forgot that I had it listed for sale.

Thanks for the link, interesting read! :0)

2006-02-22, 09:44 PM	#1
sbl Internet! Is that thing still around? Join Date: Feb 2006 Posts: 7	please critique my free site Hi there, this is my first kick of the cat at making a free site, please give me your seasoned opinions. http://springbreaklesbian.com/spring..._spring_break/ thnx

2006-02-22, 10:14 PM	#2
MrYum Arghhhh...submit yer sites ya ruddy swabs! Join Date: May 2004 Location: Sunny Florida! Posts: 5,108	Hey there Sbl I'll take a shot at ya for kicking the cat First off, your domain is listed as being for sale...that will cost you some listings. Moving on to your site itself... Entry page...looks pretty clean...perhaps a bit too clean actually. Get some ads on that page...you can have up to 3 outbound links...you'll want to use em. Your entry page is the first chance to make the sale...mmmm....sales Main page...again, very clean. Also again, get some ads on the page. The link you do have at the bottom is a blind link. Here's a good reference to learn about blind links and how to avoid them. http://www.greenguysboard.com/board/...ad.php?t=23441 Galleries...well, you got all 3 outbound sponsor links. But, they're all pretty blind...you'll definitely want to read that thread Overall, a good first kick...a bit plain perhaps, but at least it's clean and a good starting point __________________ Porno Flixxx Submissions SOTI Site Submissions Free Porn Resource Submissions

2006-02-22, 11:20 PM	#3
sbl Internet! Is that thing still around? Join Date: Feb 2006 Posts: 7	LOL Oops, looks like I got the idiom wrong! hehe Great points, I forgot that I had it listed for sale. Thanks for the link, interesting read! :0)