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2006-07-27, 04:48 PM
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Aw, Dad, you've done a lot of great things, but you're a very old man, and old people are useless
Join Date: Sep 2005
Location: Poland
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My first FS :) Could You review it?
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2006-07-27, 05:14 PM
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NO! Im not a female - but being a dragon, I do eat them.
Join Date: Mar 2003
Location: Sex Delta
Posts: 5,084
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The thing that jumped out at me was - nothing - not being sarcastic, but this is supposed to grab the surfer by the balls and get him to join a site
An example is on your main.htm - at the bottom - the sales text is so close to the background color that you can barely read it - and youve only got about a split second for that surfer to decide he wants to even read the text let alone click on it |
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2006-07-27, 05:32 PM
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There's Xanax in my thurible!
Join Date: Apr 2005
Location: Wherever they screw on my head
Posts: 2,441
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Every page scrolls horizontally at 800x600 which will get you declined at most major linklists.
Blind text links: This is one tea-baggin' babe! She sucks this guys cock so hard it almost hurts! Nice facial at the end too. Watch Full Version!!! Latina ladies are worldwide known for their huge sex apetite! We bring you the entire line of quality DVD videos from the HOTTEST LATINA cuties in action... 100% uncensored action at your fingertips, GET IT! Enjoy the satisfaction of watching the most beautiful latina women sucking huge cocks and getting fucked hard in every hole, 24 hours a day, all in DVD quality! 100's of Full-Lengh Movies just one click away! And personally, I'd add some metatags at least to the index. |
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2006-08-02, 11:17 AM
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Aw, Dad, you've done a lot of great things, but you're a very old man, and old people are useless
Join Date: Sep 2005
Location: Poland
Posts: 24
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Thanks guys for the tips!!
 Hope I won't repeat those mistakes. Here is my latest FS: http://www.ladypushporn.com/anal/brazilian/ how about this one?  |
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2006-08-02, 01:51 PM
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There's Xanax in my thurible!
Join Date: Apr 2005
Location: Wherever they screw on my head
Posts: 2,441
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Much better on the blind links.
 Your index still has a tiny bit of sidescroll on 800x600.  And do you have a submitters account with Tommy? All in all a good improvement that just needs to be tweaked a tad. |
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2006-08-02, 03:46 PM
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You can now put whatever you want in this space :)
Join Date: May 2004
Location: So close no matter how far...
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2006-08-02, 04:13 PM
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They have the Internet on computers, now?
Join Date: Jun 2006
Posts: 144
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it's only My opinion but on the second site the background it's just eye braking, one look and i want to click on the X at the top of my broswer.. try to use more soft colours on backgrounds
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2006-08-03, 10:22 AM
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Aw, Dad, you've done a lot of great things, but you're a very old man, and old people are useless
Join Date: Sep 2005
Location: Poland
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 but I'll try 700.I don't have a submitters account with Tommy but I hope in future I will have  |
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2006-08-03, 10:30 AM
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Aw, Dad, you've done a lot of great things, but you're a very old man, and old people are useless
Join Date: Sep 2005
Location: Poland
Posts: 24
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It's just an image |
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2006-08-03, 10:35 AM
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Aw, Dad, you've done a lot of great things, but you're a very old man, and old people are useless
Join Date: Sep 2005
Location: Poland
Posts: 24
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Sorry about that and thanks for the tip! |
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2006-08-03, 10:59 AM
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Arghhhh...submit yer sites ya ruddy swabs!
Join Date: May 2004
Location: Sunny Florida!
Posts: 5,108
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Hi Lady Push
 A page by page... Entry... Only issue I see here is the red onhover color really clashes with the blue background. It's one of the downsides to using a varying bg color...makes it hard to get the text and links to look right. Main... No issues here other than the same onhover link color. Especially that lower banner...big turn off to surfers Gallery one... Some reviewers may not like a half page ad above the content. Causes quite a bit of scroll to get to the actual site content. I seem to recall reading somewhere that you should be able to at least see the top edge of the content without scrolling down. The top text link is still blind (Preacher pointed this one out)... The 'Get Instant Access' button is fine when it's at least close to an ad for the paysite, but down at the bottom all by itself...it doesn't make much sense. Instant access to what??? Throw some juicy text under it...'All the Hot Latina Videos at Paysite'...something like that would help. Gallery two... That top link is still blind... "This is one tea-baggin' babe! She sucks this guys cock so hard it almost hurts! Nice facial at the end too. Watch Full Version!!!" The lower text link is borderline blind. Who's 'We'??? You'll be much better off mentioning the paysite name in your links until you're more comfortable in how to make a link that's not blind. Don't want to give reviewers reasons to decline your sites...keep em tight and clean and you'll get listed a lot more consistently |
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2006-08-03, 02:37 PM
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There's Xanax in my thurible!
Join Date: Apr 2005
Location: Wherever they screw on my head
Posts: 2,441
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My recommendation is check the site manually before you submit them, because code can do funny things to page size -- as MrYum pointed out to me when one of my css driven free-sites went beyond 800 wide in Firefox when it shouldn't have. 30 seconds worth of checking is worth it to get listed at Link-O-Rama, an 800 px stickler. |
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