My free site

[Receptor]

hey guys. im kinda new in this biz. can u maybe take a look at my FS and give me your opinion. every comment will help me a lot

thank you

page's url: http://fxxxporn.com/backseat/lesbians1/

[ta2edwhitetrash]

First off, welcome to the forum.

Might wanna think about making the index page a lil small, had to scroll down to find the enter link...IDK, b4 i got into the biz and was a regular ole' porn junkie, I'd leave the page if i had to scroll an entry page.

You only have one meta tag, that doesn't help with SE's.

Here is a sample

<meta name="keywords" content=" KEYWORDS GO HERE " />
<meta name="description" content="YOUR SITE NAME HERE" />
<meta name="robots" content="index, follow" />
<meta name="generator" content="TATTOOED-WHITE-TRASHS XXX THUMBS at Zippedsites.com" />
<meta name="rating" content="Adult">

[MMarko]

You have to make better thumbs and center top image...

[Receptor]

i'll make it smaller in next design. thank you for this thought ta2edwhitetrash

MMarko I'll fix the thumbs, I just noticed they arent lookin OK. what do you mean that I "have to center top image". which image?

[Preacher]

You site scrolls at 800x600 which will get your rejected many places.

Your thumbs look like crap, if that was a thumbnail program, custom cut the ones that are distorted (which would be about half of them).

Your thumbnailnails are not centered in the table. If you are using a GUI html editor trash it and learn how to code. A <TH> is supposed to be for headers only, a <TD> is how you build columns.

This is the graphics that is not centered and it's too big to fit in an 800x600 design anyway: http://fxxxporn.com/backseat/pictures/naslov.gif

"CLICK HERE to see where they used them ... " is completely blind text.

"Check out how girls get laid by other girls for the first time.
But definitely not for the last time ...
-
HerFirstLesbianSex.com" I'd consider that blind with the space you put in there.

There's no unlinked sales text on the index and main page.

And your http://www.fxxxporn.com/ page is just as fucked up.

I'm sure there is more that I missed, but start with that.

[Xallow]

The "More Galleries" link is blind too I think

I would put the Enter button on the index page above the warning (the warning has to be there but it doesnt have to be prominent)

[Receptor]

http://fxxxporn.com/review/lesbians/

is it any better now?
and f0k my homepage, i know it sux atm, but i'll focus on it later.

is it really OK if i have "Enter" button above the warning text?
"More Galleries" button isn't linked to a paysite, is it still blind?

thank you

[virgohippy]

If you put the warning below the enter link why even have it? A few lines of well worded warning can work to your advantage. Think of it as your opportunity to tease the surfer, telling them exactly what they'll find inside.

What Preacher pointed out on your other site still holds true to your newer one.

- Your graphics are pushing the width of your site beyond 750 pixels, so now you've got a scroll bar when viewing at 800 pixels screen size. Scroll bar = BAD.

- The tags <th></th> should really be <td></td>.

[WarBot]

Ill add my 2 cents.

Your index / warning page doesnt have any text on it. Even though its debatable if surfers read blocks of text search engine spiders do. Ive been told the real goal of a free site builder is search engine traffic (and of course sales), so the extra time you spend adding a bit of custom relevant text is probably a good thing. Also, you are allowed 3 outgoing links per page, your index only has 1. Id add at least one more somewhere near the top so the surfer see's it when they first enter your site.

Main page has 5 outgoing links. Youre allowed 3 links to sponsors + hub + whatever (not counting to galleries and / or clear 2257 page) on each page. Your mian page also has no unique text. A few days ago I did some search engine research on a fellow GG & Jim free sites submitter. I noticed that the main page of his sites are listed sometimes instead of the index / warning page. Not a TON but enough for me to think that a little search engine optimization and search engine spider food on the main and gallery pages is worth the extra effort.

Gallery pages also have too many outgoing links on them and no unique text.

Im probably overplaying the unique text / search engine aspect but its just a suggestion. I dont even pretend to know how SE's choose who and what to list but I think unique text on a site you want to get search engine traffic to is a good thing.

Cheers
WB

[Receptor]

so i have to make even smaller pictures. i thought it's ok, but looks like they're still to big. will work on that.

WarBot what "unique text" means? can you maybe describe it a bit? im kinda new around here so im not so familiar with these terms yet

and i think i've fixed number of outgoing links. i thought we are allowed 3 banners + text links. my bad it was. although page wasnt rejected on linklists ... looks like i was playing with my luck