Opinions on my new two sites please

[zargan]

I wanted to say hello to everyone!

I am a new adult webmaster, I’m a Network Engineer ! I have my own two UNIX servers.
I have just finished my first two websites:

1 – http://www/pimparena.com - Directory and Adult Webmaster Resources
2 – http://www.pimpsblogger.com – Free Adult Blog Hosting

Let me know where I’m going wrong or what I could improve on.

I have another two sites (a TGP search engine and directory and also a TGP – thumbs + text) but both are not finished yet.

I have performed some SEO hacks on my sites and the results:

www.pimparena.com

- in Yahoo Top 10 : No 6-7 in YAHOO for “adult blog hosting” search keywords
- No 25 in YAHOO for “free adult blog” search keywords
- No 22-27 in YAHOO for “adult webmaster resources” search keywords

But in Google I do not have amazing results 

Could you guys please take a look at my site and let me know what you think and what steps I should take to make it better?

My idea is to run a web HUB (TGP search engine + Fake TGP + Real TGP + Adult Blog Hosting + Adult Webmaster Resources)

Thanks!!!!