Please review my new free site

TinCan · 2004-02-19, 04:47 AM

My new free site needs a review. All suggestions and advice appreciated. Thanks.

http://www.koochieking.com/freesites...e/warning.html

Bill · 2004-02-19, 05:19 AM

Not bad. There's room for refinement and improvements, but you could well make sales and a profit with it as it is.

Your final sell link on the galleries might be seen as blind, throw in the sponsor name to be sure.

next you want to further develop your sell message and make sure you get the best use of the traffic flow thru the site.

Your recip choices are not optimum.

Greenguy · 2004-02-19, 07:12 AM

As much as I love Max Cash, I really do wish they never released that free site builder

Bill · 2004-02-19, 05:59 PM

You mean thats a generated site? Well, that doesn't count. I don't use maxcash so I didn't recognize it. Hell, even if I did use maxcash I would never use a site generator, so I still might not have recognized it.

If it's a generated site with a commonly seen style you have to work more to modify it, or it won't get accepted.

Site generators are for link list owners to populate their own sites, not for free site submitters.

DrSmut · 2004-02-19, 07:45 PM

Couple things caught my eye

1) Those banners on the warning page may be a too hardcore. I try to avoid nudity...sometimes that means photoshopping some stars or something in some well placed spots

...and if i cant then i keep it to tits only...the top banner shows a little south of the border

2....umm, shoot...i cant remember what it was...must not have been too major

ChristyB · 2004-02-21, 10:49 AM

Hi Tincan

A few tips:

1. Your banner ad text color is too close to your page background - you need to draw the surfers attention to the ad text so it should be "at least as noticeable" as the rest of your links.

2. Your warning txt is very long winded... don't forget that this site will be indexed by search engines eventually, try to cut down on the 'off-niche' text content otherwise your biggest se listings will be for words like "access" and "warning"... take a look at some of the free sites listed at greenguys link list (or mine) and find a more concise warning.

3. Use height and width tags in your images, the pages will load faster and your text will be instantly visible because the browser will leave the correct amount of space for the images whilst they're downloading.

4. Vary each pages metatitle slightly - that will give you more chances for se traffic - eg:
Index page: "Busty Blonde Babe"
Main Page: "Blonde and busty babe"
Gallery 1: "Big busty blonde Babe"
Gallery 2: "Busty naked blonde babe"
(The same applies to each pages metatags and description)

5. Your banner alt tags all say "major melons" - Add more text and make them different, sponsor site names are search terms thay are not worth fighting for unless you have a lot of experience... there's huge competition... just look up "Major Melons" on google and see what you're up against.

6. Avoid mentioning the price in your text links - concentrate on turning the surfer on, the sponsor tour will give them those details.

Surfn · 2004-02-21, 01:05 PM

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2004-02-19, 04:47 AM	#1
TinCan A woman is like beer. They look good, they smell good, and you'd step over your own mother just to get one! Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: Houston, TX Posts: 58	Please review my new free site My new free site needs a review. All suggestions and advice appreciated. Thanks. http://www.koochieking.com/freesites...e/warning.html

2004-02-19, 07:12 AM	#3
Greenguy The Original Greenguy (Est'd 1996) & AVN HOF Member - I Crop Pics For Thumbs In My Sleep Join Date: Feb 2003 Location: Blasdell, NY (shithole suburb south of Buffalo) Posts: 41,929	As much as I love Max Cash, I really do wish they never released that free site builder __________________ Promote POV Porn Cash By Building & Submitting Galleries to the Porn Luv Network

2004-02-19, 07:45 PM	#5
DrSmut Trying is the first step towards failure Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: Seattle Posts: 126	Couple things caught my eye 1) Those banners on the warning page may be a too hardcore. I try to avoid nudity...sometimes that means photoshopping some stars or something in some well placed spots ...and if i cant then i keep it to tits only...the top banner shows a little south of the border 2....umm, shoot...i cant remember what it was...must not have been too major __________________ Please Re-Read The Rules For Sig Files

2004-02-21, 10:49 AM	#6
ChristyB You tried your best and you failed miserably. The lesson is 'never try' Join Date: Aug 2003 Location: South West UK Posts: 165	Hi Tincan A few tips: 1. Your banner ad text color is too close to your page background - you need to draw the surfers attention to the ad text so it should be "at least as noticeable" as the rest of your links. 2. Your warning txt is very long winded... don't forget that this site will be indexed by search engines eventually, try to cut down on the 'off-niche' text content otherwise your biggest se listings will be for words like "access" and "warning"... take a look at some of the free sites listed at greenguys link list (or mine) and find a more concise warning. 3. Use height and width tags in your images, the pages will load faster and your text will be instantly visible because the browser will leave the correct amount of space for the images whilst they're downloading. 4. Vary each pages metatitle slightly - that will give you more chances for se traffic - eg: Index page: "Busty Blonde Babe" Main Page: "Blonde and busty babe" Gallery 1: "Big busty blonde Babe" Gallery 2: "Busty naked blonde babe" (The same applies to each pages metatags and description) 5. Your banner alt tags all say "major melons" - Add more text and make them different, sponsor site names are search terms thay are not worth fighting for unless you have a lot of experience... there's huge competition... just look up "Major Melons" on google and see what you're up against. 6. Avoid mentioning the price in your text links - concentrate on turning the surfer on, the sponsor tour will give them those details. __________________ ChristyB I have a little spot I like to show to adult webmasters Feeling submissive? Submit your free sites to my directory

2004-02-19, 05:19 AM	#2
Bill Selling porn allows me to stay in a constant state of Bliss - ain't that a trip! Join Date: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,914	Not bad. There's room for refinement and improvements, but you could well make sales and a profit with it as it is. Your final sell link on the galleries might be seen as blind, throw in the sponsor name to be sure. next you want to further develop your sell message and make sure you get the best use of the traffic flow thru the site. Your recip choices are not optimum.

2004-02-19, 05:59 PM	#4
Bill Selling porn allows me to stay in a constant state of Bliss - ain't that a trip! Join Date: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,914	You mean thats a generated site? Well, that doesn't count. I don't use maxcash so I didn't recognize it. Hell, even if I did use maxcash I would never use a site generator, so I still might not have recognized it. If it's a generated site with a commonly seen style you have to work more to modify it, or it won't get accepted. Site generators are for link list owners to populate their own sites, not for free site submitters.

2004-02-21, 01:05 PM	#7
Surfn If you don’t take a chance the Angels won’t dance Join Date: Aug 2003 Location: Earth on occasion Posts: 8,812	Come to on the bench with MrMaryLou and get answers to this and other questions