My free site

[Receptor]

hey guys. im kinda new in this biz. can u maybe take a look at my FS and give me your opinion. every comment will help me a lot

thank you

page's url: http://fxxxporn.com/backseat/lesbians1/

[ta2edwhitetrash]

First off, welcome to the forum.

Might wanna think about making the index page a lil small, had to scroll down to find the enter link...IDK, b4 i got into the biz and was a regular ole' porn junkie, I'd leave the page if i had to scroll an entry page.

You only have one meta tag, that doesn't help with SE's.

Here is a sample

<meta name="keywords" content=" KEYWORDS GO HERE " />
<meta name="description" content="YOUR SITE NAME HERE" />
<meta name="robots" content="index, follow" />
<meta name="generator" content="TATTOOED-WHITE-TRASHS XXX THUMBS at Zippedsites.com" />
<meta name="rating" content="Adult">

[MMarko]

You have to make better thumbs and center top image...

[Receptor]

i'll make it smaller in next design. thank you for this thought ta2edwhitetrash

MMarko I'll fix the thumbs, I just noticed they arent lookin OK. what do you mean that I "have to center top image". which image?

[Preacher]

You site scrolls at 800x600 which will get your rejected many places.

Your thumbs look like crap, if that was a thumbnail program, custom cut the ones that are distorted (which would be about half of them).

Your thumbnailnails are not centered in the table. If you are using a GUI html editor trash it and learn how to code. A <TH> is supposed to be for headers only, a <TD> is how you build columns.

This is the graphics that is not centered and it's too big to fit in an 800x600 design anyway: http://fxxxporn.com/backseat/pictures/naslov.gif

"CLICK HERE to see where they used them ... " is completely blind text.

"Check out how girls get laid by other girls for the first time.
But definitely not for the last time ...
-
HerFirstLesbianSex.com" I'd consider that blind with the space you put in there.

There's no unlinked sales text on the index and main page.

And your http://www.fxxxporn.com/ page is just as fucked up.

I'm sure there is more that I missed, but start with that.

[Receptor]

http://fxxxporn.com/review/lesbians/

is it any better now?
and f0k my homepage, i know it sux atm, but i'll focus on it later.

is it really OK if i have "Enter" button above the warning text?
"More Galleries" button isn't linked to a paysite, is it still blind?

thank you

[virgohippy]

If you put the warning below the enter link why even have it? A few lines of well worded warning can work to your advantage. Think of it as your opportunity to tease the surfer, telling them exactly what they'll find inside.

What Preacher pointed out on your other site still holds true to your newer one.

- Your graphics are pushing the width of your site beyond 750 pixels, so now you've got a scroll bar when viewing at 800 pixels screen size. Scroll bar = BAD.

- The tags <th></th> should really be <td></td>.

[Xallow]

The "More Galleries" link is blind too I think

I would put the Enter button on the index page above the warning (the warning has to be there but it doesnt have to be prominent)