my free site

[stfuvt]

hi all,
what do you think I can do better in my new free sites?
Here is my last free site:
http://jakeslinks.com/hardcore/hot_indian_girl6/

thanks all for suggestions

[Preacher]

"My favorite fantasy come true is a threesome with my lover! I get wet thinking about it!"
Blind

"Anjali is a UK based Indian lady that love the swinger lifestye.She loves big cocks.Wanna see how she take them?? Click Here"
Blind

"CLICK HERE to see ALL OF ME!!"
I'd probably let this slide because the text above it has the word "join" in the text above it, but it's close.

And at least 4 outbound links on your index, as a link to your hub counts towards that as well.

[stfuvt]

Originally Posted by Preacher

"My favorite fantasy come true is a threesome with my lover! I get wet thinking about it!"
Blind

"Anjali is a UK based Indian lady that love the swinger lifestye.She loves big cocks.Wanna see how she take them?? Click Here"
Blind

"CLICK HERE to see ALL OF ME!!"
I'd probably let this slide because the text above it has the word "join" in the text above it, but it's close.

And at least 4 outbound links on your index, as a link to your hub counts towards that as well.

ok I am not that good in sales text and will be more careful next time
do Exit link count as outbound link?

[Preacher]

Originally Posted by stfuvt

ok I am not that good in sales text and will be more careful next time
do Exit link count as outbound link?

If it goes to a site you get paid for yes, most will count it.

[Surfn]

I don't list any of the free content for that site. If you were to provide your own content I'd list

[Preacher]

Originally Posted by Surfn

I don't list any of the free content for that site. If you were to provide your own content I'd list

I kinda remember reading that on this board a long time ago from someone else. Mind if I ask why? I've got an Anjali site sitting in my queue as we speak.

[DJilla]

I agree with all of the above AND IMHO unless you've taken the pages offline I would add that this doesn't really qualify as a free site. Free sites have a warning page, main page (used for more ads) and at least two content pages that generally focus on your model and or sites you are selling. You can get pretty good mileage out of a good main page which is missing altogether. Finally just sending a surfer directly to a sponsor page probably isn't going to get you much. But again maybe you've taken the pages offline to work on them. Good luck.

[Halfdeck]

Hey stfuvt,

First, your text on your index is nearly invisible.

Click here to see all of me -- that's blind imo because most surfers will not see the paragraph above the link.

At least one photo is 495px on the long side.

The pics look grainy; 30kb big pics should be a thing of the past. Thumbs are also overcompressed.

Lastly, be careful with solo-girl sponsor content; they get oversaturated quick.

[stfuvt]

Originally Posted by Halfdeck

Hey stfuvt,

First, your text on your index is nearly invisible.

Click here to see all of me -- that's blind imo because most surfers will not see the paragraph above the link.

At least one photo is 495px on the long side.

The pics look grainy; 30kb big pics should be a thing of the past. Thumbs are also overcompressed.

Lastly, be careful with solo-girl sponsor content; they get oversaturated quick.

yeah, you are absolutely right about the images, this time I overdo it with compressing.all the best

[DJilla]

There the pages are, woo missed the enter link altogether, that tells you something...the top link which is blind looks like the enter link and the enter link looks like the sponsor link. No point in putting two banners for the same site on the same front page (same thing for the main page), you've got a big one on top and a little button on the bottom. Use banners for different sites. You might want a better enter and exit link design, bigger, bolder, use more text contrast. Text itself can be indented a bit of the lines on the table. Never been a big fan of horizontal gallery links either unless they are hotspots. You can save youself a link and use it for another sponsor by changing the 2257 link to text only. Seems like you're trying to trick the surfer into something rather than sell them. I'm not sayng I wouldn't list it just gentle suggesstions on how to improve it.

[MrYum]

Yep, lots of blind links...here's a good thread on the subject;

http://www.greenguysboard.com/board/...ad.php?t=23441

Also, the color scheme is hard on the eyes. Text blends into the background...and the dark blue links just kinda hurt.

Think you'll also need to deal with being blacklisted for free hosting before you'll get widespread acceptance.

[stfuvt]

Originally Posted by MrYum

Yep, lots of blind links...here's a good thread on the subject;

http://www.greenguysboard.com/board/...ad.php?t=23441

Also, the color scheme is hard on the eyes. Text blends into the background...and the dark blue links just kinda hurt.

Think you'll also need to deal with being blacklisted for free hosting before you'll get widespread acceptance.

As you see I am not using free hosting anymore, but there is no apeal link when I see my domain being blacklisted.I opened a thread on GG&J but with no answers.Emailed two times at usefulscripts with no answer so the only option that comes to my mind now is to get a new domain...
I agree with your suggestions and will read this thread you gave me.
all the best

[stfuvt]

Originally Posted by DJilla

There the pages are, woo missed the enter link altogether, that tells you something...the top link which is blind looks like the enter link and the enter link looks like the sponsor link. No point in putting two banners for the same site on the same front page (same thing for the main page), you've got a big one on top and a little button on the bottom. Use banners for different sites. You might want a better enter and exit link design, bigger, bolder, use more text contrast. Text itself can be indented a bit of the lines on the table. Never been a big fan of horizontal gallery links either unless they are hotspots. You can save youself a link and use it for another sponsor by changing the 2257 link to text only. Seems like you're trying to trick the surfer into something rather than sell them. I'm not sayng I wouldn't list it just gentle suggesstions on how to improve it.

ok I am not sure the sponsor will agree to advertise other sites with his free content or I am wrong?(not sure)Be more specific about the 2257 link I don`t think the reviews count it as an inbound link?So if it is text only is it legal? |confused|
thanks and all the best

[DJilla]

Originally Posted by stfuvt

ok I am not sure the sponsor will agree to advertise other sites with his free content or I am wrong?

This can be a close decision. An occasional sponsor could be unhappy. In general, if the page you're using the content on is primarily focused on the sponsor (80%) providing it, you're not going to have a problem by adding a secondary, minor link to another site in a related category or even better use the link to connect back to one of your own pages in your main site.

Originally Posted by stfuvt

(not sure)Be more specific about the 2257 link I don`t think the reviews count it as an inbound link?So if it is text only is it legal? |confused|
thanks and all the best

Again, here use the link to try and sell the surfer something either to a related sponsor site or back to your main site pages. You should always provide the 2257 info but you don't have to use up a valuable link to do it.

Instead of :
<a href="mysponsor/2257.htm">2257 Info</a>

just add the link location as text like:

2257 Info= www.mysponsor/2257.htm

Hope that helps