4th attempt

Loganp8000 · 2006-03-13, 03:31 PM

Ok, I thought I would return for some more punishment! Here is my 4th freesite attempt. 2nd all photo freesite. You guys really did not like my last one. Hopefully this one will be better in your eyes. i listened to everyones advice. I am going for a very clean and simple layout. Let me know what you guys think. Thanx ahead of time! ALOHA
http://www.laurensands.com/freesites...le-butt-2.html

Chop Smith · 2006-03-13, 04:06 PM

Where is the warning page?

Greenguy · 2006-03-13, 06:07 PM

I'm gonna guess that the warning page is http://www.laurensands.com/freesites...bble-butt.html

In the most basic sense, it's fine, but you might want to look into adding more text to the main & gallery pages - there's a lot of dead space on them that could be used to push surfers to the paysite.

Preacher · 2006-03-13, 08:38 PM

I'd like to see "Lauren Sands" in the text next to the Click Here To Visit Me Now, to let the surfer's know who or what they are visiting. It borders on a blind link without them.

Greenguy · 2006-03-14, 07:42 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Preacher

I'd like to see "Lauren Sands" in the text next to the Click Here To Visit Me Now, to let the surfer's know who or what they are visiting. It borders on a blind link without them.

I have to disagree, but only because if I was reviewing this particular site, I'd know that it was Logan & Lauren building & submitting, so the whole 1st person thing is fine by me & probably works better as far as marketing & clicks.

Now, if it was a Briana Banks site that said Click Here To Visit Me Now I'd giggle as I clicked the decline button

Preacher · 2006-03-14, 01:01 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Greenguy

I have to disagree, but only because if I was reviewing this particular site, I'd know that it was Logan & Lauren building & submitting, so the whole 1st person thing is fine by me & probably works better as far as marketing & clicks.

Now, if it was a Briana Banks site that said Click Here To Visit Me Now I'd giggle as I clicked the decline button

I know what you're saying, and it's the exact reason I approved the last site he submitted to my list.

That said, if one of my many native Russian submitters had used the same text I would have rejected it.

I like what Mr Yum said above, don't give a reviewer a reason to reject, because not everyone will be familiar with Logan, and putting 'my name is Lauren Sands' in the non-linked text next to the click here to visit doesn't seem like that much of a barrier to sales to me, but I'm no sales expert.

Loganp8000 · 2006-03-13, 09:12 PM

As always , thank you guys! Ok, I guess Im going for a way to clean approach. I agree the design is way to simple too. Ok I know what I ll be up to tonight. Sorry, the warning page is here http://www.laurensands.com/freesites...bble-butt.html

ALOHA GUYS!

MrYum · 2006-03-13, 09:20 PM

Yep, ya did get real clean with that one

I agree with the other comments...punch up your text. Talk about Lauren a bit more...about what makes her so hot...about what her site can offer that surfer to meet his 'needs'.

Added: Hell, you know Lauren intimately...run with that knowledge a little on your sites. Let your mind go to your fingers...what about Lauren pushes YOUR buttons

Preacher is right...'Click Here to Visit Me Now' is borderline. Since it's her site...it's a close call, but remember the cardinal rule...don't give reviewers reasons to decline your site

Loganp8000 · 2006-03-13, 11:16 PM

great points, im not sure why I am being such a lazy dumb ass, I can really design when it comes to it. So tonight I will make an effort!
ALOHA

DJilla · 2006-03-14, 04:55 AM

I don't know if this helps at all but many times I've mentioned to people that selling things on the internet uses the same basic techniques as mail order marketing. Not just in the uses of text but also in page layout, etc.. Not necessary to reinvent the wheel. If you don't know these methods, there are thousands of books that you can study and transfer the ideas. You can save yourself a lot of time and learn some professional tricks that have already been proven to SELL!

Halfdeck · 2006-03-14, 08:00 AM

http://www.laurensands.com/freesites/analtoys-FS/87.jpg

495 px wide, short 5 pixels, or 55 depending on where you submit.

Otherwise, your site is probably good to go, unless I'm missing something

A few snags:

Your background and text are both dark.

"Holy Grail of XXX Sites" just doesn't do it for me. It's like Dick Johnson calling himself "King of All Media".

You're using relative paths for your images "directory/image.jpg" instead of "http:..." or "/directory/image.jpg." Not a big deal, but it could create problems later on. I could be nitpicking.

Loganp8000 · 2006-03-14, 02:23 PM

sweet! Ya, I am getting closer but, I have an idea today for a much better freesite design. Lets hope I get time today to manifest it! ALOHA
Thank you guys!!

2006-03-13, 03:31 PM	#1
Loganp8000 I'm going to the backseat of my car with the woman I love, and I won't be back for TEN MINUTES Join Date: Feb 2006 Posts: 85	4th attempt Ok, I thought I would return for some more punishment! Here is my 4th freesite attempt. 2nd all photo freesite. You guys really did not like my last one. Hopefully this one will be better in your eyes. i listened to everyones advice. I am going for a very clean and simple layout. Let me know what you guys think. Thanx ahead of time! ALOHA http://www.laurensands.com/freesites...le-butt-2.html

2006-03-13, 04:06 PM	#2
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2006-03-13, 06:07 PM	#3
Greenguy The Original Greenguy (Est'd 1996) & AVN HOF Member - I Crop Pics For Thumbs In My Sleep Join Date: Feb 2003 Location: Blasdell, NY (shithole suburb south of Buffalo) Posts: 41,929	I'm gonna guess that the warning page is http://www.laurensands.com/freesites...bble-butt.html In the most basic sense, it's fine, but you might want to look into adding more text to the main & gallery pages - there's a lot of dead space on them that could be used to push surfers to the paysite. __________________ Promote POV Porn Cash By Building & Submitting Galleries to the Porn Luv Network

2006-03-13, 08:38 PM	#4
Preacher There's Xanax in my thurible! Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: Wherever they screw on my head Posts: 2,441	I'd like to see "Lauren Sands" in the text next to the Click Here To Visit Me Now, to let the surfer's know who or what they are visiting. It borders on a blind link without them. __________________ NSCash * This Depraved World

2006-03-13, 09:20 PM	#8
MrYum Arghhhh...submit yer sites ya ruddy swabs! Join Date: May 2004 Location: Sunny Florida! Posts: 5,108	Yep, ya did get real clean with that one I agree with the other comments...punch up your text. Talk about Lauren a bit more...about what makes her so hot...about what her site can offer that surfer to meet his 'needs'. Added: Hell, you know Lauren intimately...run with that knowledge a little on your sites. Let your mind go to your fingers...what about Lauren pushes YOUR buttons Preacher is right...'Click Here to Visit Me Now' is borderline. Since it's her site...it's a close call, but remember the cardinal rule...don't give reviewers reasons to decline your site __________________ Porno Flixxx Submissions SOTI Site Submissions Free Porn Resource Submissions Last edited by MrYum; 2006-03-13 at 09:23 PM.. Reason: Thought of something else to say...duh

2006-03-13, 09:12 PM	#7
Loganp8000 I'm going to the backseat of my car with the woman I love, and I won't be back for TEN MINUTES Join Date: Feb 2006 Posts: 85	As always , thank you guys! Ok, I guess Im going for a way to clean approach. I agree the design is way to simple too. Ok I know what I ll be up to tonight. Sorry, the warning page is here http://www.laurensands.com/freesites...bble-butt.html ALOHA GUYS!

2006-03-13, 11:16 PM	#9
Loganp8000 I'm going to the backseat of my car with the woman I love, and I won't be back for TEN MINUTES Join Date: Feb 2006 Posts: 85	great points, im not sure why I am being such a lazy dumb ass, I can really design when it comes to it. So tonight I will make an effort! ALOHA

2006-03-14, 04:55 AM	#10
DJilla You can now put whatever you want in this space :) Join Date: Sep 2005 Posts: 525	I don't know if this helps at all but many times I've mentioned to people that selling things on the internet uses the same basic techniques as mail order marketing. Not just in the uses of text but also in page layout, etc.. Not necessary to reinvent the wheel. If you don't know these methods, there are thousands of books that you can study and transfer the ideas. You can save yourself a lot of time and learn some professional tricks that have already been proven to SELL! __________________ Submit Free Sites, Blogs, Movies, TGP's, Triple XXX Info

2006-03-14, 08:00 AM	#11
Halfdeck You can now put whatever you want in this space :) Join Date: Oct 2004 Location: New Haven, CT Posts: 985	http://www.laurensands.com/freesites/analtoys-FS/87.jpg 495 px wide, short 5 pixels, or 55 depending on where you submit. Otherwise, your site is probably good to go, unless I'm missing something A few snags: Your background and text are both dark. "Holy Grail of XXX Sites" just doesn't do it for me. It's like Dick Johnson calling himself "King of All Media". You're using relative paths for your images "directory/image.jpg" instead of "http:..." or "/directory/image.jpg." Not a big deal, but it could create problems later on. I could be nitpicking. __________________ Success is going from failure to failure without a loss of enthusiasm.

2006-03-14, 02:23 PM	#12
Loganp8000 I'm going to the backseat of my car with the woman I love, and I won't be back for TEN MINUTES Join Date: Feb 2006 Posts: 85	sweet! Ya, I am getting closer but, I have an idea today for a much better freesite design. Lets hope I get time today to manifest it! ALOHA Thank you guys!!