Gallery review..please?

[tortus32]

Hey all, I run Shoekittens.com

I recently redeisgned some free galleries:


http://www.shoekittens.com/free/dee/clean.html
http://www.shoekittens.com/free/jaime_lisa/clean.html

Do you think these galleries will generate sales for me or not?
What should I add or remove?

Any input is greatly appreciated!

Thanks,

Bill

[Cleo]

Personally I don't think that 404 page is going to make you a dime.

[tortus32]

Ooops, type-o there, just fixed it.

Thanks,

Bill

[Cleo]

Kewl design.

I believe that you should never be able to have pics with seeing at lest some of the ad and when I scroll down the pics fill my whole browser window without seeing any ad.

Nice design, weak sell.

[tortus32]

Ok, cool. So you're saying that the banner should be halfway down and split the thumbs into two sections?

Thanks,

Bill

[Cleo]

Yeah I would spilt the thumbs up into two or use a vertical add along the side of them.

Also the ad text is weak and there is no call to action on the bottom ad.
Got a lust for feet? Let Little Dee wrap her stiletto heels around your throbbing cock as you sniff her aromatic stocking clad toes. Click Here for Shoe KIttens exclusive foot content that can not be found anyplace else.

Something like that anyway

[Toby]

Bill,

I see that you've submitted a few galleries to my TGP. If you'd like a partner account at Well Heeled Women just shoot me an email with your desired username and pass. All it really gets you at this point is a increase in the daily limit from 2 galleries per day to 5, but as daily submission numbers increase that will change.

Thanks,
Toby

[Doug E]

Bill, as a professional surfer / noob webmaster, props to you, the visual appeal is high!

[tortus32]

Thanks guys, and I'll definately be sending you an email today Toby!

I only have 11 models total, but I can make a few different galleries for each model I guess.

Thanks,

Bill

[tortus32]

Originally Posted by Cleo

Got a lust for feet? Let Little Dee wrap her stiletto heels around your throbbing cock as you sniff her aromatic stocking clad toes. Click Here for Shoe KIttens exclusive foot content that can not be found anyplace else.

Can I use that!?

That's wonderful!

Bill

[Cleo]

I personally don't think it is that good but you can use it if you like.

I don't know the feet niche at all, personally I think feet are kind of gross, so you should really do some learning about feet, get into the surfer's head and try to learn what it is that they find erotic about them. Maybe tie in some trampling by stiletto wearing sex kittens.

[tortus32]

Ok, take a look at this:

http://www.shoekittens.com/free/dee/clean.html

Bill

[Cleo]

Much better

[tortus32]

Thanks for all the great input!
I'm so glad I found this board

Bill

[Doug E]

hehe you should do a series of screen caps from the King of the Hill episode where Peggy becomes a foot model. thatd be funny

[tortus32]

Originally Posted by Doug E

hehe you should do a series of screen caps from the King of the Hill episode where Peggy becomes a foot model. thatd be funny

LOL!

I didn't see that episode, but I wish I did!

"I sell foot fetish and foot fetish products"

Bill

[BigVikingAl]

Very nice design. Don't know if they'll make you any sales though.