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[neveremail]

Hi all.

Just finished my first free site today. Took me about a day and a half in total to do but It was my first go. Aiming to do a new free site with new design in 2hrs.

Was figuring CSS which i haven't done before and also switched to dreamweaver which I have also never used. Aiming to do a new free site with new design in 2hrs once i get better.

Please feel free to pass your judgement and critiscicms.

I'm tinkering with the idea of including a landing page in the free site - so when ever the link is clicked to go to the main sponsor it goes to an FPA style page. What do ppl think of this idea??

Also if anyone likes it and wants to accept it for submission let me know too

http://paradisebikinis.com/bikini-sex/

[cd34]

what's the url?

[neveremail]

Originally Posted by cd34

what's the url?

get excited cause I finished it and forget the url.

[Greenguy]

The design looks good, but the content stinks

You really shouldn't mix soft & hardcore on the same free site, mostly because it really screws up what category it gets listed in.

Also, a lot of that content looks to have been rotated 90° so they look sideways which is really odd looking.

[neveremail]

You really shouldn't mix soft & hardcore on the same free site, mostly because it really screws up what category it gets listed in.

Its annoying but you are right

I see what you mean - It can't really be in a bikini/lingerie catagory but then is not entirely suitable for a hardcore category because of the bikini content. But I don't think it is neccessarily a bad gallery or something surfers aren't looking for its just hard to categorize.

There is definately a market for this style of porn otherwise sites like Bikini COntest Porn or Bikini Hookups wouldn't be about. Their whole theme is generally find a bikini babe (softcore bit) and then turn the situation into some good fucking (hardcore bit). I think there are definately surfers out there who really like this style of porn.

But again its hard to categorize but I suppose it depends on individual LL owners views on what they want in thier categories. If anyone has any suggestions then let me know. Otherwise it could be very hard to promote sites like bikini contest porn and bikini hookups.

Also, a lot of that content looks to have been rotated 90° so they look sideways which is really odd looking.

This is how the photos have been taken - obviously the photographer thought is was a good idea. Personally I like it - its always good to have something a bit different - but if you don't like it then that is fair enough. But if I like it then I'm sure there will be others out there who do too.

Be interesting to see what everyone else says |cool|

Do you think I should scrap this gallery or it is still worthy in the right LLs?

[Greenguy]

Why would you put a pic that's sideways online?

Does this look ok to you?

[ronnie]

I agree the sideways pictures make me dizzy..

ronnie

[ArtWilliams]

In my browser (Firefox) at 1280 x 800, the pages were left aligned. You may want to throw the whole thing into a 1x1 table and centre it.

-- art

[neveremail]

Originally Posted by artwilliams

In my browser (Firefox) at 1280 x 800, the pages were left aligned. You may want to throw the whole thing into a 1x1 table and centre it.

-- art

I designed it to be left aligned - is that a problem?

[MrYum]

Originally Posted by neveremail

I designed it to be left aligned - is that a problem?

Don't know that I'd call it a problem. But, since most folks design for center alignment...I think some reviewers will assume it's a mistake and possibly decline the site.

It does look kinda silly at higher screen resolutions

Other than that, the site looks good...I'd list it

[ronnie]

I've never been a fan of sites that are not centered, just dont look right. Could be just me..

ronnie

[neveremail]

Site is now centred and I sorted out the images to be the right way up.

Any other comments??