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Old 2004-02-20, 09:57 PM   #1
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ok i started 2 paysites a while back

one really kicked off, so i started putting a lot of effort into it now its sitting there tiding over itself

but now iam left with my other one that i cant seem to convert ive tried alot, i have affiliates promoting it, had it redeesigned im just beggining an SE campaign on it (this is my field of excellence so iam haoping it will go well, but i through some of my other SE traffic at it and it didnt convert to anything)


http://www.teenecstasy.net
http://www.teenecstasy.net/01/

any comments etc will be great!
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Old 2004-02-20, 11:52 PM   #2
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http://www.teenecstasy.net/01/tour.html

2nd image on this page is broken! Other than that looks nice.
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Old 2004-02-21, 12:18 AM   #3
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i just moved that tour over, sorted now
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Old 2004-02-21, 01:46 AM   #4
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I got my penis out and I clicked on your link. Then I put it back in my pants. The girls on the tour aren't cute in my opinion. Invest in some better content. Not trying to be rude.

The design is fine. It's all about the content. Oh, and no text really jumped out at me, but then the girls didn't excite me enough to make me want to read the text.
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Old 2004-02-21, 09:40 AM   #5
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I took a few minutes to go through your site, not that I have a clue, but here's some recomendations

1) You have a mix between an old style classic tour and what seems like it might want to become a long tour. With the image compression, etc, I would recommend going with a long tour (not to mention that old style classic tour declines everday in conversions).
2) Once you go with the longer style tour, add more content, as stated above Rictor didnt personally care for the girls in the tour, Rictor isnt buying the membership so thats fine, there probably is someone who will like the girls you have there, BUT if Rictor doesnt like what you have there, it's safe to say someone else wont like what you have there either. Show more content, more girl types, it allows you to atleast get guys like Rictor or myself to ignore the not so great one's, and be somewhat excited about the one's or types we like.
3) Don't be affraid to show content, perception is EVERYTHING, if you owned a retail store and customers came in, first thing they saw was a pile of dirt, than you would automatically have a Dirty Store.



As always best of luck.
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Old 2004-02-21, 09:53 AM   #6
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Everyone here is making some good points.

When going through the tour I really felt like there were only 5 or 6 girls and maybe that many photo sets inside. From the tour I just don't get the feeling that there is anything there.

This is more what I would expect to see in an AVS network and not as a stand alone pay site.
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Old 2004-02-21, 10:38 AM   #7
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thanks

thanks,

as we speak the designer is adding another tour page, and more girls.

there is alot of content in the mebers area i just didnt want to give to much away on the tour so , hopefully this will help
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Old 2004-02-21, 04:06 PM   #8
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ya brotha let your customers know what they are going to get and make them want it. the amount of content that i saw on that tour was very minimal.
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