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Old 2004-10-18, 06:34 PM   #1
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made some changes what u think xxxhots.com

xxxhots.com
Please let me know what u think and if you have any suggestions.
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Old 2004-10-18, 07:01 PM   #2
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It looks good. The only things I would change is to put your submit a link at the bottom of the page where we usually look and I wanted to submit to you, but you said not to change the recip.

I would change it to fit the rest of my recips:

<table border=2 bordercolor="#ff0099" cellpadding=10>
<tr>
<td align=center>
<A HREF="http://www.xxxhots.com">
<font size=4 color="#ff0099" face=arial><b>
XXXHots.com<br><font size=3>
Adult Porn Links</a></b></font>
</td></tr></table>

If this ok to change, let me know and I will submit my sites.


The banner is not showing up. The lime green on the white background is very hard to see. Also, you have two different font faces on your page. You might want to make the font bigger too.

2. No Bestiality, No Incest,& No Child Porn - - you need a space after incest,

Hope this helps.

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Old 2004-10-18, 09:06 PM   #3
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First impressions (blunt):


You've got a serious scroll at 800x600, which is what most of the world surfs at

The pixellation on the hardcore thumbs takes a lot away from the page. If you're concerned about showing hardcore you're better off putting up a warning page, which is just one more place to sell a surfer. If you're concerned about 2257, pixellation won't help you anyway.

You should either tighten up the category list on the left or fill the page up some more.

The times new roman font and blue links make the category pages look kinda "blah." As a wise man once told me "never use default anything."

I never put full text webmaster ads (like Webmasters: Use 1000s of the above free videoclips (served at our
expense) to earn up to $70 per free iFriends signup, via ClickCash.com. ) on surfer pages, it reminds them that you're only there to sell them something.



You're off to a good start, but you really need to do some streamlining. The pages don't seem to flow.

Don't be discouraged...as anyone here will tell you the first round of newbie lessons is the hardest. |rasta|

BTW, welcome to the forums. There's a lot that can be learned here and this place is full of good people. Hopefully you'll stick around.
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Old 2004-10-18, 10:01 PM   #4
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Thumbs up yes you can change it to what u posted

That will be ok with me if you change it to that of what you posted.

Thanks for the tips, it always takes others eyes to see something you don't thanks for the suggestions.

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