My first FS :) Could You review it?

[Linkster]

The thing that jumped out at me was - nothing - not being sarcastic, but this is supposed to grab the surfer by the balls and get him to join a site

An example is on your main.htm - at the bottom - the sales text is so close to the background color that you can barely read it - and youve only got about a split second for that surfer to decide he wants to even read the text let alone click on it