built my first freesite

[born2blog]

Well, I've never really ventured into the land of freesites but decided to give it a go. Here is my first example: http://www.lovelylizvicious.com/redhead-teen/index.html

Any comments/advice/suggestions are welcome, even if they are negative. Like I say, it's my first one so be as brutally honest as you'd like, I don't mind as long as it's constructive criticism.