Most converting promo tools

[Maj. Stress]

Originally Posted by Mr Spock

Surely much more text is required (unlinked) with the punchline linked? What are your thoughts?

If you look at your server stats you will see a majority of your potential customers are there 30 seconds or less. I would guess text that grabs them works the best.

For the rest of them that actually do read your sales pitch, I think a fair amount 150-200 words might help get the sale (and the bots might find something they like). So it's really a matter of who you want to target.