Feedback on freesite

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Originally Posted by LD

... but I like to draw immediate attention to the sponsor's paysite, especially on the main page. Once they get there, you know you’ve got their attention. I really want to get them to the sponsor at that point.

OK, so my main-new-2.html got no response and maybe wasn't that good. I think it was too dark on top. I have now put up a main-new-3.html, http://www.toosxxx4.com/mature-cutie...ain-new-3.html, which is a small change from one of the earlier versions, but I think it makes a substantial positive difference in the direction LD recommended. I am still hoping someone will comment helping me, and who knows maybe someone else, build a better freesite in the the future. If not I would probably start submitting with this last one.

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