Noobs first post... my free site review

[eliquid]

Hi im new here and this is my first post.

Im trying to learn free sites and hubs, been a tgp gallery submitter for a few years though.

My free site is at:
http://www.amateurflirt.com/sites/facial/1/free1.htm

Its not all done, still need to add a few things, but had some questions....

Does it look ok for now? Im I on the right path for a free site that will be accepted by most link list?

I am wanting to add a link on the pages to a hub I am making, but dont know if I can do that.. is that allowed and if so where should I put it on, the gallery pages?

Also would any more links out be accepted on the main landing page, I woudl like to put a link to my tgp there as well.

Thanks and any info would be great, this is my first free site and I want to learn and make it right