Can U review my 1st Free Site?

[Alphawolf]

My 1st free site is HERE

It took longer than I thought to really think out ad copy, placement and do the css color scheme.

I have a lot more LL recips to collect too.

I *really* tried to maximize each page to get people to visit the sponsor instead of using my bandwidth.

Max of 3 links per page right?

Any comments would be appreciated...

My big questions are:

1) Did I create an effective sales tool?
2) Is there anything I should modify to squeeze any more potential out of this free site?
3) Will LL reviewers find this site to be A-okay or are there any pet peeves I did that may annoy some LL reviewers?
4) Can I go to a 15 recip link table instead of 12?

Ya know- the reality of just having ONE of these per day to be able to submit is hitting me.

If I pay attention to comments here, and build clean, tight free sites- how long until I can get partner accounts?

PS- just realized I forgot a couple meta tags like keywords. Will add those in a bit.

I really want to feel confident about things before I start submiting, so i hope all you partying people come back to the boards today/tonight.

TIA (hoping peeps are around)