Newbie needs review

Cleo · 2005-03-09, 09:25 PM

You use lots of text which is a very good thing.

Your pics are over compressed and will hurt you in getting listed.

Some of your links are a bit blind.
Like this one
"Cum watch sexy young lesbians have a strap on party
And a pussy licking contest!"

Add in the sponsor's name so that it isn't blind.
Like this
Cum watch sexy young lesbians have a strap on party at LesboErotica
And a pussy licking contest!
Click Here for LesboErotica

I don't care for the red text on a green background. You may want to take a look at the colors use don the sponsor's site for ideas on what colors to use.

2005-03-09, 09:25 PM	#2
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