another one to review

neticule · 2005-04-04, 10:40 PM

Warning Page:
#1. There is 4 sponsor links, 3 is maximum.

Main page looks fine, no rules broken (*that i can see)

Galleries look fine, however, since your using 30 images, why not make 3 galleries instead of just 2? That gives you a whole extra page to advertise on.

Also, I dont know why you have your 2257 unlinked, no linklists i know of count this as a link, so its fine to take out the non linked url and just link the 18 U.S.C.2257 text to that page.

Looks good to me, except for the 4 sponsor links on the warning page.

The advertising needs a little work, but thats all stuff you learn as you go, nothing specific, you will learn how to better catch the surfers eye, but you do have one thing right, IMO, you dont only use banners. I see so many newbies just using banners, its nice to see that you also incorporate text. Try adding some other colors as well though to the text links, just an example, your text "Watch this beautiful teen strip and show you her tight little shaved pussy at Projectteensex.com"

Make "tight little shaved pussy" some other font color. Most surfers wont read even a whole sentence, unless a few words from that sentence catch their eye.

Hope this helped, im sure others will be able to give you some more tips as well

2005-04-04, 10:40 PM	#2
neticule A boy without mischief is like a bowling ball without a liquid center Join Date: Jan 2004 Posts: 437	hmm Warning Page: #1. There is 4 sponsor links, 3 is maximum. Main page looks fine, no rules broken (*that i can see) Galleries look fine, however, since your using 30 images, why not make 3 galleries instead of just 2? That gives you a whole extra page to advertise on. Also, I dont know why you have your 2257 unlinked, no linklists i know of count this as a link, so its fine to take out the non linked url and just link the 18 U.S.C.2257 text to that page. Looks good to me, except for the 4 sponsor links on the warning page. The advertising needs a little work, but thats all stuff you learn as you go, nothing specific, you will learn how to better catch the surfers eye, but you do have one thing right, IMO, you dont only use banners. I see so many newbies just using banners, its nice to see that you also incorporate text. Try adding some other colors as well though to the text links, just an example, your text "Watch this beautiful teen strip and show you her tight little shaved pussy at Projectteensex.com" Make "tight little shaved pussy" some other font color. Most surfers wont read even a whole sentence, unless a few words from that sentence catch their eye. Hope this helped, im sure others will be able to give you some more tips as well __________________ Mom, I'm done! Come wipe!