Any improvment on free sites making and listing, get listed

[Magix]

So, last week , i /ve made a thread for my first sites. Comments vere, and many of you menchioned my mistakes, wich i tryied to fix. i think i, ve fixed them, but still i'm not always happy with my work, so i decided to show you some new sites witch i've made, Please say some comments, any mistakes please say it to me i need to hear what to change, to get better sales and traffic.

Here links:

http://www.pornomagix.com/freesites/swhard/

http://www.pornomagix.com/freesites/frankf/

http://www.pornomagix.com/freesites/maturta/

the last deep in hole, this i don't like i like more to do gallerie photo free sites, but this time i've doen an experiment on movies, but i think it din't work out well.

http://www.pornomagix.com/freesites/deepin/


So i'm waiting for yuor comments thanks all