Freesite review " be hard on me " ;]

[MrYum]

Hey there Jaffie

I'll jump in here and give ya a page by page...

Entry page...

Very clean...very bland...but VERY clean

Seriously, Robert is right...get yourself some ads on that page. You can have up to 3 outbound links...I suggest you use em. We're not giving away porn, we're selling it...or at least that's the goal

You'd probably do yourself a big favor by perusing some of the listings on a few of the link sites you intend to submit to. Look at how other submitters do things...get yourself some...errr...inspiration. I have o to add here...do not directly copy anyone's work...that will get you into huge trouble. Not saying you're the kind of person that would do such a thing, but since you're new...it's gotta be said

Main page...ooopsie...there is no main page...lol.

Again, I agree with Robert. The beauty of the basic free site layout is it gives you 4 pages to sell the surfer...use that real estate as your disposal. Go ahead and add a 'main' page with your 3 allowed outbound links and your 2 gallery links. It's another sales page...and trust me on this...sales are yummy!

Gallery one...

Your text is very small and really blends into the page. Don't make it HUGE, but bump it up a few pixels. And don't be afraid to use something other than the default font. Right now, the text is so small and with your extra page breaks...it's almost close to a blind link. Not quite...but could be close enough to give you problems getting listed.

Gallery two...pretty much the same comments as gallery one. However, the text link here...while still hard to see...it certainly not blind since it fully mentions the name of the paysite.

Lastly, yep...you defintely want to get your pictures in order. The series of pics should flow through the site in sequence.

Not a bad first attempt...tweak things a bit and ask for another look