Feedback On My First Free Site Please

RawAlex · 2004-07-02, 03:46 AM

Where to start?

There is no site title on any of these pages. Your free sites should always have a title, and that title should appear on all of the pages. That is the title you are going to submit to the link sites.

The pages are all too wide. Reset your monitor to 800X600 and try again.

The galleries have (1) too many pictures, and (2) those pictures are not clearly related. Gallery 1 have some pictures with a red background, and then suddenly 2/3 of the way down there is a totally different photoset. The red pictures by themselves were enough images for a gallery (try to stay between 10 and 15 pictures per gallery, 2 gallerys for a total of 20-30 images per free site).

Spacing between the thumbs is way too large.

Way too much linked text on the gallery pages... Three paragraphs of underlined text is a bit more. Considering linking SOME of it, and using different fonts to make it clearer. Possibly split the text up and put it between the rows of thumbs.

Did you know it may be illegal to sell used panties in the US? :-)

Alex

2004-07-02, 03:46 AM	#4
RawAlex Took the hint. Join Date: Mar 2003 Posts: 5,597	Where to start? There is no site title on any of these pages. Your free sites should always have a title, and that title should appear on all of the pages. That is the title you are going to submit to the link sites. The pages are all too wide. Reset your monitor to 800X600 and try again. The galleries have (1) too many pictures, and (2) those pictures are not clearly related. Gallery 1 have some pictures with a red background, and then suddenly 2/3 of the way down there is a totally different photoset. The red pictures by themselves were enough images for a gallery (try to stay between 10 and 15 pictures per gallery, 2 gallerys for a total of 20-30 images per free site). Spacing between the thumbs is way too large. Way too much linked text on the gallery pages... Three paragraphs of underlined text is a bit more. Considering linking SOME of it, and using different fonts to make it clearer. Possibly split the text up and put it between the rows of thumbs. Did you know it may be illegal to sell used panties in the US? :-) Alex