Here's another one to review

Halfdeck · 2005-03-12, 06:00 PM

Hi Briskit,

http://www.4hotxxx.com/sweet-shaved-lesbians

Your 2257 should be linked to a separate 2257 page.

Gain full & unlimited access to these
and tons of other freebies!!! -- imo that's a blind link. Squeeze a sponsor name in there.

Also it says "freebies" but I don't really see anything free about that paysite, so some reviews can see it as misleading text.

Your exit link should go to a non-adult sponsor, not google.

You repeat "unlimited access" 3 times on the page, which SE might like but from surfers pov, I associate unlimited access for e.g. dvd download sites that lets you download whatever without DRM protection, instead of like AEBN VOD where you pay per movie or some other sites where the movies die once you cancel.

http://www.4hotxxx.com/sweet-shaved-lesbians/main.html

"Click here for more hot fucking lesbian love!" might be a *little* blind.

The site is too bright for my eyes and could be spiced up a bit visually, but overall I don't see huge problems with the site

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2005-03-12, 06:00 PM	#3
Halfdeck You can now put whatever you want in this space :) Join Date: Oct 2004 Location: New Haven, CT Posts: 985	Hi Briskit, http://www.4hotxxx.com/sweet-shaved-lesbians Your 2257 should be linked to a separate 2257 page. Gain full & unlimited access to these and tons of other freebies!!! -- imo that's a blind link. Squeeze a sponsor name in there. Also it says "freebies" but I don't really see anything free about that paysite, so some reviews can see it as misleading text. Your exit link should go to a non-adult sponsor, not google. You repeat "unlimited access" 3 times on the page, which SE might like but from surfers pov, I associate unlimited access for e.g. dvd download sites that lets you download whatever without DRM protection, instead of like AEBN VOD where you pay per movie or some other sites where the movies die once you cancel. http://www.4hotxxx.com/sweet-shaved-lesbians/main.html "Click here for more hot fucking lesbian love!" might be a little blind. The site is too bright for my eyes and could be spiced up a bit visually, but overall I don't see huge problems with the site