another one to review

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Originally Posted by Briskit

Anyone else want to give some feedback. I'm only learning! or Do yall think its ok to submit

Briskit

Hi Briskit,

I don't really care for using the word teen along with "girls' or "young". Esp. the latter. Just doesn't sound right to me. I know you state that they are 18 & 19 but still. I'm sure there are other LL that won't list you because of it. Other than that and the 4 sponsors on a page that was already mentioned, it would be ready for you to submit. Just MHO...