Please review my 3rd Free Site

[Lemmy]

Nice FS! There is room for improvement, though. A few things I noticed were:

1. Background color/text color combo on index might be difficult for some people to read.
2. Some LLs might have a problem with the thumbs on the HPA on the main page.
3. Promoting four different sponsors on the same FS is spreading it a little too thin IMO.
4. The mouseover on the AFF banner says Oliver's Girls.
5. Pics are a little too heavy. Try to get them down to the 40-60k range.

[neveremail]

Originally Posted by Lemmy

Nice FS! There is room for improvement, though. A few things I noticed were:

1. Background color/text color combo on index might be difficult for some people to read.
2. Some LLs might have a problem with the thumbs on the HPA on the main page.
3. Promoting four different sponsors on the same FS is spreading it a little too thin IMO.
4. The mouseover on the AFF banner says Oliver's Girls.
5. Pics are a little too heavy. Try to get them down to the 40-60k range.

Changes made:

1. Background colour is now a very faint green.

2. Changed the yellow text to red to make it more readable.

3. Got rid of the thumbs on the HPA.

4. Changed mouseover on AFF banner.

I'm not promoting 4 sponsers it is 3 as Heathers Hot Spot is a feeder site to Olivers Girls.

Any more opinions???