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Furrygirl, once again you take helpful suggest as an attack on your person. It isn't. I read the sales text the first time and it struck me as negative not positive. We sell happiness and joy, not put downs and "neener-neener". People don't want to know or don't want to be reminded that some parts of this industry are run in a manner similar to McDonalds or Dunkin Donuts. Reminding them of that isn't helping your sales pitch.
In the end, I think it is a great selling point, and would be a great selling point if you put it in positive spin about yourself rather than creating it out of negative spin on others. Everything about your sales pitch (unless you are selling BDSM or similar) should be happiness and light... negative campaign ads don't do it.
Just an opinion, you can take it or leave it. I didn't post it as an attack on you or your person, but just making point that I got taught almost 10 years ago getting into this business: Sell the positive, sell the sex, sell the happy... stay on message and don't let the negative anythings get in there.
Alex
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2006-01-03, 10:14 AM
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