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2006-03-08, 08:17 AM
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Wheither you think you can or you think you can't, Your right.
Join Date: Jun 2004
Location: midwest
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I agree, while the color scheme is not bad, it's just not real pleasant on the eyes, think the colors are a little to bright?
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2006-03-08, 09:34 AM
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You can now put whatever you want in this space :)
Join Date: Oct 2004
Location: New Haven, CT
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Hi Star Man,
Your color-scheme would tempt me to reject, but frankly I have seen worse. Go for a unique title for a free site. Don't name them after the paysite you're promoting. Some reviewers will reject you for that. Banners on index rotates real slowly. Till the paysite name rotates in (after 10 seconds wait) your text is effectively blind. Also, I find that video sponsor irrelevant to the traffic you're targetting with your free site. Personally, I'd remove that ad, but that's just me. One thing you definitely need to fix before submitting is the pics size. Otherwise, you're good to go 
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2006-03-08, 09:37 AM
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A boy without mischief is like a bowling ball without a liquid center
Join Date: Feb 2006
Location: clevel.......don't make me say it!
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Hey,thanks for the feedback guys!
 Actually I think I'm going to put this one on hold.I'm working on some more galleries right now that I'm more comfortable with and I don't think some cliche porn chick is going to sale that good anyhow.As far as the colors go,yeah I agree.I tried to retain the theme of the paysite but it didn't work out to well.Hope I didn't waste your time guys.I should have have a new one up today and I would appreciate you guys scoping it out if you get a chance.thanks Last edited by Star Man; 2006-03-08 at 09:46 AM.. |
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