Lorshasworld.com first shot at a free site. Critique please!

[MrYum]

Originally Posted by lorsha

I took your advice MrYum and read over carefully the post on the blind links. I think I have a much better understanding of what to do now. Thanks again so much guys for the advice. Here is the finished product of our first free site: http://www.lorshasworld.com/free/index.htm

Looking forward to making more!

Mark & Lorsha

Excellent...yea, that thread has helped many folks

The site looks good and I'd list it as is

The only thing I see that some reviewers may balk at would be the top right banner on the 2nd gallery. That one could still be considered a bit blind. It doesn't mention the site name, or "Take the Tour"...etc.. Perhaps just add a bit of text below "Cum Watch" to read "Cum Watch @ Lorsha's World".

Other than that...nice clean site...well done

[lorsha]

Originally Posted by MrYum

Excellent...yea, that thread has helped many folks

The site looks good and I'd list it as is

The only thing I see that some reviewers may balk at would be the top right banner on the 2nd gallery. That one could still be considered a bit blind. It doesn't mention the site name, or "Take the Tour"...etc.. Perhaps just add a bit of text below "Cum Watch" to read "Cum Watch @ Lorsha's World".

Other than that...nice clean site...well done

Made the change on that one hun. And here is a big Cheer for all your help! And I just submitted to your site.

~ Lorsha

[MrYum]

Originally Posted by lorsha

Made the change on that one hun. And here is a big Cheer for all your help! And I just submitted to your site.

~ Lorsha

Glad to help Lorsha

And thanks for the submission...I do have a weakness for MILF