Is this any better?

Braindead · 2007-01-30, 09:27 AM

Hello all,
A new effort from the braindead. I think I have addressed some of the comments raised last time.
New comment/insult welcomed.
http://pornwaters.com/great-bi-sex.index/
Braindead

MrYum · 2007-01-30, 10:18 AM

Looking good Braindead

A couple minor comments...

Your keywords meta reads a little spammy. General rule of thumb...don't include words that aren't on the page, and don't repeat the same word more than 3 times. Meaning...sex, bi sex, hot sex...would be 3 uses for the word sex.

Your server is responding a bit slowly. Could be something between here and there though...

This blue text link on your main page is almost invisible on that black bg.

"Click here for the best free Bi-sex tour"

Your page titles are off center on the galleries.

Other than those 'picky' issues, the site looks pretty good

japamor · 2007-01-31, 02:43 AM

As Mr Yum says you need to center your Gallery titles. Also did you mean for the title of your site to be your domain name? There's no particular reason why not but it looks unusual to have the dot com in the title.
One final point - your Richards Realm banner might be considered too graphic at some LLs. Cocks come after the warning page.

SaucyPanties · 2007-01-31, 04:24 AM

Whilst I am all for parents ensuring minors do not have access to adult media, I find it strange that you chose to have an affiliate link to Sentry PC. Your visits are going to come from the Link Lists, which means the user has already had a very good read down that list and selected your site from the raunchy description. If they are a minor visitng then they shouldn't be on your site and they are hardly going to call their parents in to come and buy the software? If they are an adult surfer Sentry PC is surely the last thing on their mind??

Personally I would rather use the link on something adult related and if you feel strongly about minor's having access register your site with http://www.rtalabel.org/

Braindead · 2007-01-31, 01:38 PM

Thank you for your comments.
Mr Yum and japamor, the off centre header is a design consideration, as is the 'dot com', if at some future date I want to promote 'PornWaters' as a brand I don't think it will hurt to have the name recognised a little.
That was a question for the future; is it worth promoting all the free sites on one main 'PornWaters.com' site or is that shooting yourself in the foot giving away a load of free stuff all in one place at one time. On the other hand is it a good way to get your ads exposed? I really don't know.
The ‘Richard’s Realm link banner, you know far more than I so I will change it and thanks’ for the advise. I didn’t put a text link there, for obvious reasons.

SaucyPanties, as a Grandfather I say from some knowledge that children know just about all there is to know by the age of ten or eleven and they will do as they will at an earlier age than that. Put any kind of block on a computer and a school friend will know how to get round it. With detailed instructions on the net for building a chemical bomb I would be amazed if the ‘fix’ for content blocking software were not there somewhere as well.
I abhor child exploitation in all forms not just sexual. I enjoyed my children and my Grandchildren growing up; sadly the latter were going on nineteen at the age of nine, hardly surprising when you consider they were taught to be adults from the age of six at school by “Liberal” minded adults.
The Sentry thing is there because it is easier to place than the equally pointless Netnanny and the rest, if anyone has ever clicked on it I have yet to learn of it. If you find it offensive I will gladly remove it.
One more question if I may, ‘Penisbot’ says on the submit page that the submission made there is also submitted to other important lists. (They name them) Does that mean those lists do not have to have their own submission forms filled out?
Many thanks’
braindead

japamor · 2007-02-01, 02:59 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Braindead

One more question if I may, ‘Penisbot’ says on the submit page that the submission made there is also submitted to other important lists. (They name them) Does that mean those lists do not have to have their own submission forms filled out?
Many thanks’
braindead

That's a new one on me Braindead. I've just checked Penisbot's sub page and the sites they name are one's they don't want anything to do with.

Braindead · 2007-02-01, 05:34 AM

You're right japamor, sorry. Too many late nights, not enough brandy.
That's my excuse and I'm sticking to it.
Yours
braindead.

japamor · 2007-02-01, 01:13 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Braindead

You're right japamor, sorry. Too many late nights, not enough brandy.
That's my excuse and I'm sticking to it.
Yours
braindead.

No problem. I know the feeling.

2007-01-30, 09:27 AM	#1
Braindead A woman is like beer. They look good, they smell good, and you'd step over your own mother just to get one! Join Date: Jan 2007 Posts: 51	Is this any better? Hello all, A new effort from the braindead. I think I have addressed some of the comments raised last time. New comment/insult welcomed. http://pornwaters.com/great-bi-sex.index/ Braindead

2007-01-30, 10:18 AM	#2
MrYum Arghhhh...submit yer sites ya ruddy swabs! Join Date: May 2004 Location: Sunny Florida! Posts: 5,108	Looking good Braindead A couple minor comments... Your keywords meta reads a little spammy. General rule of thumb...don't include words that aren't on the page, and don't repeat the same word more than 3 times. Meaning...sex, bi sex, hot sex...would be 3 uses for the word sex. Your server is responding a bit slowly. Could be something between here and there though... This blue text link on your main page is almost invisible on that black bg. "Click here for the best free Bi-sex tour" Your page titles are off center on the galleries. Other than those 'picky' issues, the site looks pretty good __________________ Porno Flixxx Submissions SOTI Site Submissions Free Porn Resource Submissions

2007-01-31, 02:43 AM	#3
japamor I Love Turkish Delight, they're very moreish. Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: UK Posts: 578	As Mr Yum says you need to center your Gallery titles. Also did you mean for the title of your site to be your domain name? There's no particular reason why not but it looks unusual to have the dot com in the title. One final point - your Richards Realm banner might be considered too graphic at some LLs. Cocks come after the warning page. __________________

2007-01-31, 04:24 AM	#4
SaucyPanties No matter how good you are at something, there's always about a million people better than you Join Date: Apr 2005 Posts: 231	Whilst I am all for parents ensuring minors do not have access to adult media, I find it strange that you chose to have an affiliate link to Sentry PC. Your visits are going to come from the Link Lists, which means the user has already had a very good read down that list and selected your site from the raunchy description. If they are a minor visitng then they shouldn't be on your site and they are hardly going to call their parents in to come and buy the software? If they are an adult surfer Sentry PC is surely the last thing on their mind?? Personally I would rather use the link on something adult related and if you feel strongly about minor's having access register your site with http://www.rtalabel.org/ __________________ Saucy Used Panties

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2007-01-31, 01:38 PM	#5
Braindead A woman is like beer. They look good, they smell good, and you'd step over your own mother just to get one! Join Date: Jan 2007 Posts: 51	Thank you for your comments. Mr Yum and japamor, the off centre header is a design consideration, as is the 'dot com', if at some future date I want to promote 'PornWaters' as a brand I don't think it will hurt to have the name recognised a little. That was a question for the future; is it worth promoting all the free sites on one main 'PornWaters.com' site or is that shooting yourself in the foot giving away a load of free stuff all in one place at one time. On the other hand is it a good way to get your ads exposed? I really don't know. The ‘Richard’s Realm link banner, you know far more than I so I will change it and thanks’ for the advise. I didn’t put a text link there, for obvious reasons. SaucyPanties, as a Grandfather I say from some knowledge that children know just about all there is to know by the age of ten or eleven and they will do as they will at an earlier age than that. Put any kind of block on a computer and a school friend will know how to get round it. With detailed instructions on the net for building a chemical bomb I would be amazed if the ‘fix’ for content blocking software were not there somewhere as well. I abhor child exploitation in all forms not just sexual. I enjoyed my children and my Grandchildren growing up; sadly the latter were going on nineteen at the age of nine, hardly surprising when you consider they were taught to be adults from the age of six at school by “Liberal” minded adults. The Sentry thing is there because it is easier to place than the equally pointless Netnanny and the rest, if anyone has ever clicked on it I have yet to learn of it. If you find it offensive I will gladly remove it. One more question if I may, ‘Penisbot’ says on the submit page that the submission made there is also submitted to other important lists. (They name them) Does that mean those lists do not have to have their own submission forms filled out? Many thanks’ braindead

2007-02-01, 05:34 AM	#7
Braindead A woman is like beer. They look good, they smell good, and you'd step over your own mother just to get one! Join Date: Jan 2007 Posts: 51	You're right japamor, sorry. Too many late nights, not enough brandy. That's my excuse and I'm sticking to it. Yours braindead.