hello everybody

[SheepGuy]

Originally Posted by Lesa

ok here is my site
http://www.selectedgirls.com
tell me everything i did wrong, or what i should do in next sites,
i did that start page like small tgp (and will linking to free sites whenever i do new one) if google catches my site to have more traffic on those free sites which are linked with main page. Is that ok?
i started doing sites a couple days ago so i am absolute beginer.
tell me anything i should do or shouldnt do to get better traffic.
thanks.
lesa

What you're doing with your start page is not only OK, it's a very good idea! Once you get a few sites together I'd start linking them back to your start page as well.
I'd say you're off to a good start, a few spelling and grammar mistakes but nothing too bad.
Your 16 text recips table looks fine to me.