Please review my site

[beastor]

This is my first free site. Ok, I made a few attempts before lol.

http://www.erotictymes.com/f1/index.html

Any input or suggestions would be appreciated.

[Licker4U]

Not bad for a first site. On the index page I would tuck the text under the first banner up closer to the banner and I would make the Enter link a little larger, it's pretty obvious that it's the Enter link since it's down there all by itself but it wouldn't hurt to make it a little larger. At the bottom of your stories, I would say "Click here for the full story at (insert sponsor's name). That way the surfer knows where they're going. I'm sure more knowledgable people will add their .02.

[Berry]

Veeery big font for title
IMHO

[beastor]

Does anyone have any rules about illustrated stories? Any specifics on images sizes or numbers.

The story starts .... goes for a bit ... they decide on the hot tub.
You see a image of a path through the snow leading to the open door of a small greenhouse with a hot tub inside. The snow banks leaning against the sides of the greenhouse. The steam billowing out the partly open door.

A bit more story then a image. Maybe a cameltoe pic.
A bit more of the story with perhaps a anal pic.
Then the bottom of the page, a banner for cameltoes and one for all anal or something like that.


How exactly does image ownership work? If I pimp nastydollars for example, do I "own" one of their free images so I can include it in a story?

If one takes an image from say, Milf hunter. Then, one writes what happens in the rest of the photo set as a story. The end result is a story with one watermarked image from milf hunter and 3 milf related links with banners.

Can it be done? Has it been done? Would anyone list it if it was done or do we need an actual example?

Sorry to be a rain of questions but as I understand it, if there are answers, the answers are here somewhere in Greenie's world.

[ronnie]

If you use a sponsors image, you have to promote their program or one of their sites. No one owns sponsor provided images except for the sponsor.

The stories look very short to me. Not much of a story being that short.

[spacemanspiff]

What about doing a story site with a few of the sponsor's softcore teaser pics embedded in the abbreviated version that you submit to the linklists, with your 'click here for more" going to the rest of the story on it's own page with more hardcore sponsors pics, but still not to hard, and links to that sponsor's site using text like "see the rest of the pics/movies here?

[beastor]

Originally Posted by spacemanspiff

What about doing a story site with a few of the sponsor's softcore teaser pics embedded in the abbreviated version that you submit to the linklists, with your 'click here for more" going to the rest of the story on it's own page with more hardcore sponsors pics, but still not to hard, and links to that sponsor's site using text like "see the rest of the pics/movies here?

That is mostly what I was thinking. The stories are currently around 500 words. The real versions of all of them are way longer. Some of them up to 20 pages long. I should check word count sometime.

I removed the toy ad because toys are not stories. I am going to change the first story to something a bit more exciting. Men will just leave if the first story is bad. Women normally take a peek at the second story before they bail.

I am thinking more text around the banners telling people that the sponsors are naturally, the best sponsors ever to exist.

The full versions of the stories will appear on erotictymes in a day or two. The idea being that on the free site, I tempt them with more story sponsors. If they read the full version then, I can tempt them with something that matches the story ie a spanking sponsor for a spanking story.

That way, we have the if you love reading stories, this sponsor has 100s more for you to read and we have the if you loved the spanking story, this sponsor has all spanking, all the time


I will try illustrated stories for the next free site. Then we can decide if it works better to have the "see the rest of the pics/movies here" works best with a direct link to the sponsor's site or perhaps to their fhg.

[Ms Naughty]

Beastor, I'd definitely put some text with the banners, it always helps to tell the surfer more about your sponsors.

If you were going to use sponsor images on a page then you could only put ads for that sponsor on that page.

I'd list that site easily

[beastor]

I have it all straightened out now I ended up swapping domains so that beastor became erotictymes then parking beastor back on top.
That did not work exactly as I thought it was going too lol

Beastor's Erotictymes now has the Et story menus combined with all the great stuff I had before. All that remains is to text up the banners.

It was the "beast" part of beastor that ccbill had banned. When google catches up, it will be glorious.