Feedback on my new review site

[AndyS]

Nicely categorized page that should work well but woooo they are big reviews, text is always good I just wonder how many people are going to read all of it.

If you do want reviews that big maybe bolding key points in the text would help break it up and allow people who just scan the page to get your sell points quickly.

You can do some writing for me anytime :-)

[horney]

I like it, too. Just one, relatively minor but important grammatical point. Like many people, I find grammatical errors a distraction. Like many other people, you have confused the plural and the possessive.

Within the first few words of the site, you have "lover's". Whose lovers? The apostrophe makes it possessive. It should be "lovers". There are more than one of them (you hope) and no possession should be implied.

[pc]

I like Mr Porn Hero .He looks very good , maybe he should be more visible in different places on the site ( pointing something maybe )Just idea.

[japamor]

Originally Posted by horney

I like it, too. Just one, relatively minor but important grammatical point. Like many people, I find grammatical errors a distraction. Like many other people, you have confused the plural and the possessive.

Within the first few words of the site, you have "lover's". Whose lovers? The apostrophe makes it possessive. It should be "lovers". There are more than one of them (you hope) and no possession should be implied.

Nice one horney. I too am fanatical about the apostrophe 's' when it denotes possession. It confuses many people. There is one great rule to remember: The apostrophe denotes ownership/possession. Put the apostrophe AFTER the owner/possessor.
Thus: one lover owns some wine: the lover's wine; but several lovers own some wine: the lovers' wine.

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Nice site by the way, BigVikingAl!