What am I doing wrong

Bill · 2010-06-03, 05:00 PM

I wouldn't be able to make sales in those niches either.

I'm sorry man, this is a tough time to be starting the biz.

Anyway - your selling text doesn't have any "hooks", no juice, no stickiness, nothing that digs into the brain of your target surfer and tickles their nichey imprinted reaction to the exact type of thing that you want them to be feeling that will make them unconsciously pull out the card in a mindless "oh fuck I got to have more of this..." sexual haze.

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2010-06-03, 05:00 PM	#10
Bill Selling porn allows me to stay in a constant state of Bliss - ain't that a trip! Join Date: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,914	I wouldn't be able to make sales in those niches either. I'm sorry man, this is a tough time to be starting the biz. Anyway - your selling text doesn't have any "hooks", no juice, no stickiness, nothing that digs into the brain of your target surfer and tickles their nichey imprinted reaction to the exact type of thing that you want them to be feeling that will make them unconsciously pull out the card in a mindless "oh fuck I got to have more of this..." sexual haze.