too much text? - Greenguy's Board

2004-04-23, 11:20 AM

kinimod

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Quote:

Originally posted by urb
That's quite a lot of text imo.

Can I make two constructive observations?

1) Every paragraph starts with the word "Alright".
2) 2nd, 3rd & 4th paragraphs are all in caps.

I can nuke the "alright" from the text and would it be better in your opinion to make all the paragraphs all caps or just use normal text?

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