Critique my first site?

[dareutwo]

I wouldn't list it simply because she isn't Naked.
The unlinked thumbs really aren't a problem with this particular site.
I would lose the Blinking gif at the bottom of the gallery pages...it's annoying. Annoying doesn't make for a happy surfer.

Then Ditto what DD said -

What works and sells for Tgp's doesn't always work by simply combining 2 gallery pages and adding an index and main page.
I know Cleo does exactly that, but her galleries and sites take a bit of both with her own selling and site building style.

The gallery pages that sponsors create are mostly horrible and you can spot them from across the room.