is there something I'm doing wrong?

MadMax · 2004-09-03, 02:53 PM

Well, here's what I see on http://www.analniche.com/double_team_anal and my opinion

1) You're promoting Anal, which is a pretty well saturated niche. This makes any single anal site more likely to have trouble with conversions. This doesn't kill you, but it means you have stiffer competition.

2) The thumbs and full size pics are a bit fuzzy with bad lighting, and are probably screen-caps from video. This (and the sponsor logo on the pics) indicate to me that this is probably sponsor content, and not particularly good sponsor content at that.

3) The sales text is borderline excessive, IMO, and not very easy on the eyes. All that bold text in a block tends to run together. Make your point with fewer words, and what you write is more likely to get read.

4) The phrase "eating their own shit off of dicks after they've been up their ass" is questionable sales material even to my tastes, and I'm one sick fuck in the first place. If you're going to promote standard Anal, you may want to promote a site that's not so much on the "extreme" end of anal.

These are just my opinions, and you might get more specific advice from someone who actively promotes a lot of anal sites.

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2004-09-03, 02:53 PM	#2
MadMax "Without evil there can be no good, so it must be good to be evil sometimes" ~ Satan Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: Motor City, baby, where carjacking was invented! Now GIMME THOSE SHOES! Posts: 2,385	Well, here's what I see on http://www.analniche.com/double_team_anal and my opinion 1) You're promoting Anal, which is a pretty well saturated niche. This makes any single anal site more likely to have trouble with conversions. This doesn't kill you, but it means you have stiffer competition. 2) The thumbs and full size pics are a bit fuzzy with bad lighting, and are probably screen-caps from video. This (and the sponsor logo on the pics) indicate to me that this is probably sponsor content, and not particularly good sponsor content at that. 3) The sales text is borderline excessive, IMO, and not very easy on the eyes. All that bold text in a block tends to run together. Make your point with fewer words, and what you write is more likely to get read. 4) The phrase "eating their own shit off of dicks after they've been up their ass" is questionable sales material even to my tastes, and I'm one sick fuck in the first place. If you're going to promote standard Anal, you may want to promote a site that's not so much on the "extreme" end of anal. These are just my opinions, and you might get more specific advice from someone who actively promotes a lot of anal sites.