First attempt at a free site - feedback requested

[nemocnice]

Please take a look at my first free site and let me know if it's acceptable.

http://saddlegirls.com/freesites/80331/

The recips I put on are some I found on a few others' warning pages and thought that was the best way to find lists to submit to. I saw on the link-o-rama rules page that there needs to be at least 5 other recips, so I hope that part is OK.

The movies are 20 seconds each, and there are 6, so I meet the 120 seconds requirement.

If there is anything that would keep it from being accepted, please let me know so I can make corrections.

Thanks in advance for your time and advice.

[nemocnice]

I think I may have misunderstood the minimum video requirement.

Dumb question: Is it per gallery page or free site?

I have a feeling it's each gallery page, so I'm going to fix that right now.

[Fonz]

It's 120 seconds per site so your first effort was good enough.

Your freesite looks like it's going to get listed with most LL's. One more thing, make your links to your sponsors stand out a little more. They're kind of well, invisible. Also you are allowed to put 3 outgoing links on your pages (2257 link not counted) you're using only 1-2 links per page. Try to use all 3 of them for a bigger chance for success

Other than that it's a pretty clean freesite. I'd list it.

[nemocnice]

Originally Posted by Fonz

It's 120 seconds per site so your first effort was good enough.

Your freesite looks like it's going to get listed with most LL's. One more thing, make your links to your sponsors stand out a little more. They're kind of well, invisible. Also you are allowed to put 3 outgoing links on your pages (2257 link not counted) you're using only 1-2 links per page. Try to use all 3 of them for a bigger chance for success

Other than that it's a pretty clean freesite. I'd list it.

Thanks very much for the quick response. Is your site http://www.smilingpussylinks.com? If so, I'll will submit there. If it's a different site, please correct me.

I'm still looking for sites to submit to, so if anyone likes this free site, please reply here and let me know your site. Thanks!

[Maj. Stress]

Overall the site is clean. I would suggest some more sales text. Talk to the surfer. Tell them what they will get with their membership.

[nemocnice]

Great, thanks for the suggestion. I'll keep that in mind for the next one.

[Tobbe]

I would list it!

[LD]

See sig...

[spacemanspiff]

I agree with Fonz. It's a nice, clean site, but it's a bit plain. Kind of comes off like a newspaper article. I'd definitely list it since it provides what my surfers are looking for, but it's to your advantage to jazz it up a bit. Bigger text, juicy fonts, enticing language, etc.

[nemocnice]

Thank you all. I'll work on the sales text and colors for the next freesite.

It took me something like five hours from the time to build the site, to finding lists to submit to, to actually submitting (with several distractions along the way). I can see why people cheat and try to automate everything. But, I'm a cheapskate, so no tools for me except Photoshop and my HTML editor.

On a positive note, a few lists have already sent me an acceptance email, so I'm happy. Thanks again everyone!

[Fonz]

Originally Posted by nemocnice

Is your site http://www.smilingpussylinks.com?

Indeed it is

[nemocnice]

Originally Posted by Fonz

Indeed it is

Great! I've just emailed you to apply for an account.

[japamor]

For a first site that's very good indeed. I'd list it.

[nemocnice]

Thanks for the feedback. I've been working on the sales text and will have another to submit soon. I'll add your site to my submissions list.

[Twiceshy]

Great Start for first Freesite .I would list it