A Review For Me
 

Hello All |greenguy|
Just Wanted to Get Some Feedback On My Latest Creation. http://www.naughtybabs.com/ILUVORAL/1/index.htm

A little friendly advice about you link text.

I think some of your links to your sponsor are a little blind.

"See Her Gobble Up The Cock And Dribble Our Hot Cum"
Where will the surfer see this? In your site or at your sponsors paysite?

"Cum Sucking Sluts Throat Fucking Large MEat Poles"
This link really shouldn't even be a link.

"$200.00 + 1/2 Hour= A Fan Fuckin' Tastic Blow Job And A Pretty Face Smothered In Warm Sticky Cum"
Could be used as sales text/description

I think you need to redo all your links. Just keep in mind when creating your sponsor links to tell the surfer where the will be going when they click it and you will increase your chances of getting your site listed.

I also don't think the first letter of every word should be capitalized.

Looks pretty good to me.