A Review For Me

binxgook · 2005-03-14, 08:06 PM

Hello All

Just Wanted to Get Some Feedback On My Latest Creation. http://www.naughtybabs.com/ILUVORAL/1/index.htm

Presmar · 2005-03-15, 02:39 AM

A little friendly advice about you link text.

I think some of your links to your sponsor are a little blind.

"See Her Gobble Up The Cock And Dribble Our Hot Cum"
Where will the surfer see this? In your site or at your sponsors paysite?

"Cum Sucking Sluts Throat Fucking Large MEat Poles"
This link really shouldn't even be a link.

"$200.00 + 1/2 Hour= A Fan Fuckin' Tastic Blow Job And A Pretty Face Smothered In Warm Sticky Cum"
Could be used as sales text/description

I think you need to redo all your links. Just keep in mind when creating your sponsor links to tell the surfer where the will be going when they click it and you will increase your chances of getting your site listed.

I also don't think the first letter of every word should be capitalized.

Genbucks: Sean · 2005-03-15, 01:16 PM

Looks pretty good to me.

2005-03-14, 08:06 PM	#1
binxgook My big ole' fat baby loves to eat Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: Minnesota Posts: 689	A Review For Me Hello All Just Wanted to Get Some Feedback On My Latest Creation. http://www.naughtybabs.com/ILUVORAL/1/index.htm

2005-03-15, 02:39 AM	#2
Presmar My wife is not a doobie to be passed around! On our wedding day I promised to bogart her for life! Join Date: Dec 2004 Location: Cleveland Ohio Posts: 272	A little friendly advice about you link text. I think some of your links to your sponsor are a little blind. "See Her Gobble Up The Cock And Dribble Our Hot Cum" Where will the surfer see this? In your site or at your sponsors paysite? "Cum Sucking Sluts Throat Fucking Large MEat Poles" This link really shouldn't even be a link. "$200.00 + 1/2 Hour= A Fan Fuckin' Tastic Blow Job And A Pretty Face Smothered In Warm Sticky Cum" Could be used as sales text/description I think you need to redo all your links. Just keep in mind when creating your sponsor links to tell the surfer where the will be going when they click it and you will increase your chances of getting your site listed. I also don't think the first letter of every word should be capitalized. __________________ Free Targeted Teen SE Traffic! Submit your Free Sites Here! sex-free-teen.com

2005-03-15, 01:16 PM	#3
Genbucks: Sean Rock stars ... is there anything they don't know? Join Date: Mar 2005 Posts: 19	Looks pretty good to me.