Please critique this new tour I've been working on.

[[BV]]

I decided to take the plunge and widen things up a bit.

In the past I have always been a big fan of 1 or 2 page short and sweet type tours but this is a 15 page magazine style tour that I think fits this site well.

What do you think?

You can send your traffic to any models page you like from a matching banner, FHG, HFS, whatever so the surfer sees the same model first that triggered them to click through.

Link codes:

http://www.beachmodel.com/alicias.php?ccbill=1352409

http://www.beachmodel.com/brittany.php?ccbill=1352409

http://www.beachmodel.com/charlotte.php?ccbill=1352409

http://www.beachmodel.com/erika.php?ccbill=1352409

http://www.beachmodel.com/krisy.php?ccbill=1352409

http://www.beachmodel.com/layla.php?ccbill=1352409

http://www.beachmodel.com/masha.php?ccbill=1352409

http://www.beachmodel.com/paris.php?ccbill=1352409

http://www.beachmodel.com/raquel-sar...ccbill=1352409

http://www.beachmodel.com/rose.php?ccbill=1352409

http://www.beachmodel.com/stefany.php?ccbill=1352409

http://www.beachmodel.com/stephania.php?ccbill=1352409

http://www.beachmodel.com/tashia.php?ccbill=1352409

http://www.beachmodel.com/tracy.php?ccbill=1352409

http://www.beachmodel.com/vika.php?ccbill=1352409

I'm finishing up a default universal 1st page now that will have a logo and all the other models thumbs underneath.

Cheers,
BV

[Greenguy]

I think it looks like every other magazine style tour.

[j3sUS183]

Originally Posted by Greenie

I think it looks like every other magazine style tour.

You're right Greenie.. but i like this tour!

[Greenguy]

Well, to be honest, the only real difference on any of these magazine style tours is the model on the fake cover, so if you like the model, you like the tour

[[BV]]

Originally Posted by Greenie

I think it looks like every other magazine style tour.

You really think so? I don't.

I think you need to look again.

For example:

Show me one that the cover is 900 pixels wide or larger.
Show me one that has other pctures on the cover besides the main cover pic.
Show me 2 that doesent open everything in new fucking windows.
Do all the others allow you to send each individual models page? I'm not 100% sure on this one but I think not.

Smoke another and have another look!

[tickler]

Personally I like being able to deep-link to different pages as long as they have proper navigation up and down.

[virgohippy]

Originally Posted by tickler

Personally I like being able to deep-link to different pages as long as they have proper navigation up and down.

I couldn't agree more. Nicely done [BV]

Only thing I'd suggest is making the call to action a bit more prominent.

When I look at the covers I'm so focused on the itty bitty strings tucked up into sexy little creases and curves to pay much attention to the promotional text.

Maybe some off image text that's a bit more prominent... right between the big image and the navigation images is a perfect spot, I think.

Something simple is fine, "See More Inside - Join Now" etc.

[Greenguy]

Originally Posted by [BV]

...Smoke another and have another look!

You asked for opinions & I gave you mine.

Just be thankful I didn't burry this in Products & Services

[[BV]]

Originally Posted by virgohippy

I couldn't agree more. Nicely done [BV]

Only thing I'd suggest is making the call to action a bit more prominent.

When I look at the covers I'm so focused on the itty bitty strings tucked up into sexy little creases and curves to pay much attention to the promotional text.

Maybe some off image text that's a bit more prominent... right between the big image and the navigation images is a perfect spot, I think.

Something simple is fine, "See More Inside - Join Now" etc.

DONE: Thank You for the input. Good idea.

[[BV]]

Originally Posted by Greenie

You asked for opinions & I gave you mine.

Just be thankful I didn't burry this in Products & Services

Thank You Greenie, I am very thankfull that you allowed me to post this. You are the man!

I try to swing by here every day and answer questions and give input on topics that I have experience with. I appreciate you letting me do that as well.

[dareutwo]

"The most explicit & extreme thong bikini site on the net!"
Do you have verified proof from a third party?
If not, that's false advertising, sold cars for way too many years. One lawsuit and you'll be finding out quick if in fact you are.

Not exactly sure what bikini surfers are interested in (just my 1.67 cents Canadian) - however.
I'd tease them more, don't show them completely naked. Have them find that inside.

[virgohippy]

Originally Posted by dareutwo

Not exactly sure what bikini surfers are interested in (just my 1.67 cents Canadian) - however.
I'd tease them more, don't show them completely naked. Have them find that inside.

A non-nude version might be advantageous. Just be sure to let them know there's nudity inside.

[[BV]]

Originally Posted by virgohippy

A non-nude version might be advantageous. Just be sure to let them know there's nudity inside.

I have a nn tour: http://www.beachmodel.com/nn_tour.php?ccbill=1352409



Not this mag style though.

[[BV]]

Originally Posted by dareutwo

"The most explicit & extreme thong bikini site on the net!"
Do you have verified proof from a third party?
If not, that's false advertising, sold cars for way too many years. One lawsuit and you'll be finding out quick if in fact you are.

Are you serious or joking?

I don't know whether to laugh or cry, hehe

Verified proof? From whom?
Does fan mail count?

you are


Does GreenGuy & Jim have verified proof that this is "The Ultimate Webmaster Resource"


hahaha

[virgohippy]

I'll say it for you:

Beach Model dot com is the most explicit & extreme thong bikini site on the net I've ever seen! And I've seen more then one.

Now quote me every chance you get, because virgohippy's word is gold. |clown|

[dareutwo]

Originally Posted by [BV]

Are you serious or joking?

I don't know whether to laugh or cry, hehe

Verified proof? From whom?
Does fan mail count?

I'm dead serious. Why do cars have JD Powers awards, why does porn have AVN awards? If you can't prove it, you can't claim it, period.
Some grandmother in sometown Kentucky may have proof against you and sue you.

Try selling your used car on the honda site with "world's best used car". That'd rake up a few million in legal fees. But notice all their used car ads use JD Powers.

You need a third party or change your claim.

GG&Jim is not a rating resource. You're trying to claim an absolute in an infinate sphere.

Originally Posted by [BV]

Does GreenGuy & Jim have verified proof that this is "The Ultimate Webmaster Resource"


hahaha

Probably not, though I'd like to think so, but are they charging anyone?? And THAT is the Key Difference!

Personally, I'd ask your lawyer before I turned that tour loose.
Like I said, just my 1.67 Canadians worth

[dareutwo]

Originally Posted by virgohippy

I'll say it for you:

Beach Model dot com is the most explicit & extreme thong bikini site on the net I've ever seen! And I've seen more then one.

Now quote me every chance you get, because virgohippy's word is gold. |clown|

You should be able use this.
"Beach Model dot com is the most explicit & extreme thong bikini site on the net I've ever seen! And I've seen more then one. - VH"

But again, I'd strongly suggest running this past a lawyer.

(and to make it a legally binding contract, you have to send VH at least a penny and ask his permission to use his quote - certified mail with receipt)
Aren't paysites a blast!

[[BV]]

Originally Posted by dareutwo

I'm dead serious. Why do cars have JD Powers awards, why does porn have AVN awards? If you can't prove it, you can't claim it, period.
Some grandmother in sometown Kentucky may have proof against you and sue you.

Try selling your used car on the honda site with "world's best used car". That'd rake up a few million in legal fees. But notice all their used car ads use JD Powers.

You need a third party or change your claim.

GG&Jim is not a rating resource. You're trying to claim an absolute in an infinate sphere.


Probably not, though I'd like to think so, but are they charging anyone?? And THAT is the Key Difference!

Personally, I'd ask your lawyer before I turned that tour loose.
Like I said, just my 1.67 Canadians worth

Yes GreenGuy and Jim does charge money for their services.

Ever notice those banners everywhere on here? Do you think those add spots are free?

Look at your own avatar button, it reads: "Marks Links" The best adult links. and yes your making money of that site.

Steve Jones says: Claims he has: "the hottest in legal teen babes around" he might have, but that's unprovable. It's an opinion.

http://www.carsdirect.com claims: CarsDirect is your #1 resource for car research and pricing information on all makes and models.

and

CarsDirect.com is the best place to buy new cars online.

SO,

This is waaaaaay out of character for me to say but you have just rubbed me wrong with your stupid nonsense. Do yourself a favor and take your 1.67 and stick it up your ass because you son are full of shit.

BV

[AdPayout TBrown]

cool site you have!

I like that magazine-style...though I miss some more trailers or pics at least