Please critique this new tour I've been working on.

[virgohippy]

Originally Posted by tickler

Personally I like being able to deep-link to different pages as long as they have proper navigation up and down.

I couldn't agree more. Nicely done [BV]

Only thing I'd suggest is making the call to action a bit more prominent.

When I look at the covers I'm so focused on the itty bitty strings tucked up into sexy little creases and curves to pay much attention to the promotional text.

Maybe some off image text that's a bit more prominent... right between the big image and the navigation images is a perfect spot, I think.

Something simple is fine, "See More Inside - Join Now" etc.

[[BV]]

Originally Posted by virgohippy

I couldn't agree more. Nicely done [BV]

Only thing I'd suggest is making the call to action a bit more prominent.

When I look at the covers I'm so focused on the itty bitty strings tucked up into sexy little creases and curves to pay much attention to the promotional text.

Maybe some off image text that's a bit more prominent... right between the big image and the navigation images is a perfect spot, I think.

Something simple is fine, "See More Inside - Join Now" etc.

DONE: Thank You for the input. Good idea.