My first freesite attempts

[Monkey Spanker]

Hi everyone

Joined the board yesterday as I wanted to learn all about the wonderful world of freesites and link lists. I put together 2 sites and submitted them and only recieved one decline due to their recip being on a doorway page. I think I am on the right track and would just like critiques from the pros that are here.

http://www.getflesh.com/bustingout/1/

http://www.getflesh.com/chubbyjugs/1/

It is sponsor content, but I don't think Score Cash is over exposed so I hope that is all right. Doorway pages? Is it OK the way I have it set up? I read a couple different threads on here that say different things so I guess it might depend on the linklist owner.

Before you start jumping.....hold on a second......damn this couch is heavy!



OK....shoot!