Please review my first FreeSite and...

BigRoB · 2007-04-19, 02:29 AM

Hi Folks,

i'm back

and i build my first FreeSite, so please review it and give me your Feedback. It's a long time ago, to build this Sites, this Feedback is very important for me!

A Big Thank You!

oldbrad · 2007-04-19, 02:48 AM

First off, it's pretty nice looking

A couple things though. First, you want to make sure to fix the spelling and grammar errors like "A blondes getting their asses fucked hard by huge dicks" should be a blondes getting her ass fucked by a hard huge dick. I think its just one guy and one girl in both galleries.

Second, the girl is a brunette and it says blonde everywhere, so you should say brunette. You also should change the title and keywords on each page instead of the same one throughout. Get you a lil se some some.

The site looks really good though, i like the design, just need a few tweaks.

Grammar. Different title/header. Change blondes to brunettes. If you want you could ad a mouseover to the ads to show the site url only, but whatever you want with that.

I'd list it at Foxys with those couple tweaks

Brad

BigRoB · 2007-04-19, 03:08 AM

Tanks for your fast an helpful answer.

yes the Title & Description ist wrong, i use a test-picture-set for this FreeSite and this Description is from a listing FreeSites on Penisbot.

My next Step is optimizing for SearchEngines: alt, title text's and metatags.

And than, i build a Design for every day in the Week.
7 different FreeSites Design's and than i submit only the same Design 4 in the month, but the Sites have different Content.

Yes, English is not my first Language, sorry for that.

oldbrad · 2007-04-19, 03:20 AM

No prob, it looked good and except for a couple things was fine. I can't do css yet, so ya got me beat. You can go wider in the future if you want as well, 750 width will be good for even 800/600 and may give you more room for ads and whatnot.

You had 2 sponsors per page which is good, i noticed the link at the bottom to your homepage so it would count as the 3rd link usually. If you wanted to get traffic to it, you could make it a little more prominant being that it counts as one of your outlinks anyway.

Good luck

Brad

Lemmy · 2007-04-19, 07:05 AM

The first thing I do when I review a site from an unknown submitter is check the whois info. Yours leaves something to be desired. You need to fix that before becoming a "trusted submitter".

BigRoB · 2007-04-19, 01:52 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Lemmy

The first thing I do when I review a site from an unknown submitter is check the whois info. Yours leaves something to be desired. You need to fix that before becoming a "trusted submitter".

What?
What's wrong with the whois info? |confused|

BigRoB · 2007-04-19, 05:34 PM

|confused| ... no more feedback?

i refresh my site with the new input, so please review again and give me a little help, please.

Here

Thanks!!

Lemmy · 2007-04-19, 06:17 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by BigRoB

What?
What's wrong with the whois info? |confused|

Your domain is registered to a company in the US, but hosted in Austria where I assume you are located (if you are the tech contact listed). I find that to be so unusual I'd like some clarification.

BigRoB · 2007-04-19, 06:48 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Lemmy

Your domain is registered to a company in the US, but hosted in Austria where I assume you are located (if you are the tech contact listed). I find that to be so unusual I'd like some clarification.

Yes, but i live in the fucking anti-adult-land germany. it's the only way for good hosting.

@FreeSite Reviewer / LL Owner
Is the Whois with the same company and hosting, the important thing for a Signup on a Partner Account or a submit on LinkList's?

oldbrad · 2007-04-20, 11:15 AM

Search the forum for godaddy problems. There are quite a few and some people won't list you if your hosted with them and as you can see people will check the whois to see.

Lemmy · 2007-04-20, 11:20 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by BigRoB

@Lemmy
In the next Time i switch with Domain & Hosting to godaddy.

@Useless Warrior
Free Sites is new for me so i will testing python and leadingedgecash.

That really didn't clear up much for me and I'm just as confused.

Quote:

Originally Posted by BigRoB

Many AdultWebmaster in Germany use Godaddy für Hosting, Domain with Whois-Protect and she have no bad problems with it.

No, i don't have Paysites.

If I recall correctly GoDaddy specifically prohibits adult content. Using whois protection is a surefire way NOT to get listed.

BigRoB · 2007-04-20, 12:12 PM

A Domain with Whois Protection is the only way for a german living webmaster.

And what is a good Hosting & Domain with Whois Protection Company for me? (Paypal compatiple)

So what's up with that? Are you using a friend's domain and hosting?
Yes, it's a Service form a Friend in Austria.

fresh · 2007-04-20, 08:29 PM

Relax mate, not all LL has problems about whois protection. I submit with whois protected domain, only couple of LL declined me for that.
Nice looking design by the way, If you are honest webmaster-good luck in the game of freesites

BigRoB · 2007-04-21, 08:16 AM

Thanks, fresh.

An the next Day's i have all my different Designs and than i started.

2007-04-19, 02:29 AM	#1
BigRoB Aw, Dad, you've done a lot of great things, but you're a very old man, and old people are useless Join Date: Nov 2004 Posts: 24	Please review my first FreeSite and... Hi Folks, i'm back and i build my first FreeSite, so please review it and give me your Feedback. It's a long time ago, to build this Sites, this Feedback is very important for me! A Big Thank You!

2007-04-19, 02:48 AM	#2
oldbrad It is better to watch things then to do them Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: oregon Posts: 485	First off, it's pretty nice looking A couple things though. First, you want to make sure to fix the spelling and grammar errors like "A blondes getting their asses fucked hard by huge dicks" should be a blondes getting her ass fucked by a hard huge dick. I think its just one guy and one girl in both galleries. Second, the girl is a brunette and it says blonde everywhere, so you should say brunette. You also should change the title and keywords on each page instead of the same one throughout. Get you a lil se some some. The site looks really good though, i like the design, just need a few tweaks. Grammar. Different title/header. Change blondes to brunettes. If you want you could ad a mouseover to the ads to show the site url only, but whatever you want with that. I'd list it at Foxys with those couple tweaks Brad __________________ Help MrMaryLou Link to his Chubby TGP & Chubby Links on your sites and blogs.

2007-04-19, 03:20 AM	#4
oldbrad It is better to watch things then to do them Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: oregon Posts: 485	No prob, it looked good and except for a couple things was fine. I can't do css yet, so ya got me beat. You can go wider in the future if you want as well, 750 width will be good for even 800/600 and may give you more room for ads and whatnot. You had 2 sponsors per page which is good, i noticed the link at the bottom to your homepage so it would count as the 3rd link usually. If you wanted to get traffic to it, you could make it a little more prominant being that it counts as one of your outlinks anyway. Good luck Brad __________________ Help MrMaryLou Link to his Chubby TGP & Chubby Links on your sites and blogs.

2007-04-19, 07:05 AM	#5
Lemmy You can now put whatever you want in this space :) Join Date: Sep 2004 Location: Next door to a kid with a moped. Posts: 1,492	The first thing I do when I review a site from an unknown submitter is check the whois info. Yours leaves something to be desired. You need to fix that before becoming a "trusted submitter". __________________ BUY MY PORNSITES!

2007-04-20, 11:15 AM	#10
oldbrad It is better to watch things then to do them Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: oregon Posts: 485	Search the forum for godaddy problems. There are quite a few and some people won't list you if your hosted with them and as you can see people will check the whois to see. __________________ Help MrMaryLou Link to his Chubby TGP & Chubby Links on your sites and blogs.

2007-04-19, 03:08 AM	#3
BigRoB Aw, Dad, you've done a lot of great things, but you're a very old man, and old people are useless Join Date: Nov 2004 Posts: 24	Tanks for your fast an helpful answer. yes the Title & Description ist wrong, i use a test-picture-set for this FreeSite and this Description is from a listing FreeSites on Penisbot. My next Step is optimizing for SearchEngines: alt, title text's and metatags. And than, i build a Design for every day in the Week. 7 different FreeSites Design's and than i submit only the same Design 4 in the month, but the Sites have different Content. Yes, English is not my first Language, sorry for that.

2007-04-19, 05:34 PM	#7
BigRoB Aw, Dad, you've done a lot of great things, but you're a very old man, and old people are useless Join Date: Nov 2004 Posts: 24	\|confused\| ... no more feedback? i refresh my site with the new input, so please review again and give me a little help, please. Here Thanks!!

2007-04-20, 12:12 PM	#12
BigRoB Aw, Dad, you've done a lot of great things, but you're a very old man, and old people are useless Join Date: Nov 2004 Posts: 24	A Domain with Whois Protection is the only way for a german living webmaster. And what is a good Hosting & Domain with Whois Protection Company for me? (Paypal compatiple) So what's up with that? Are you using a friend's domain and hosting? Yes, it's a Service form a Friend in Austria. Last edited by BigRoB; 2007-04-20 at 12:15 PM..

2007-04-20, 08:29 PM	#13
fresh Kids are great, Appu. You can teach them to hate the things you hate and they practically raise themselves now-a-days, you know, with the internet and all Join Date: Nov 2006 Posts: 199	Relax mate, not all LL has problems about whois protection. I submit with whois protected domain, only couple of LL declined me for that. Nice looking design by the way, If you are honest webmaster-good luck in the game of freesites __________________ MY FAVORITE HOSTING: Unlimited sites for 4.95$+, 99.9% uptime, 24/7 live support Last edited by fresh; 2007-04-20 at 08:42 PM..

2007-04-21, 08:16 AM	#14
BigRoB Aw, Dad, you've done a lot of great things, but you're a very old man, and old people are useless Join Date: Nov 2004 Posts: 24	Thanks, fresh. An the next Day's i have all my different Designs and than i started.