How'm I Doin' Part 2: My First Gallery

JustAnotherDude · 2004-02-11, 12:26 AM

I appreciated the first round so much and since I'm new, thought I'd bug you a bit more. Here is my first gallery (free content from that sponsor). How's it look? Am I on the right track, way off, somewhere in between?

Jesus thanks you:

DangerDave · 2004-02-11, 01:39 AM

JustAnotherDude

hmm a couple of problems with that one...

Pics open in new windows.. most places dont allow that.

Your table/thumbs are too wide... at 1024x768 you gallery scrolls off the side of my monitor..

that will get rejected to

You gallery lacks SELL! you need more text in there enticing the surfer to BUY...

The linked "I luv Blowjobs" header will get you declined in a few places too

So its a decent start... just needs some tweaking

DD

Surfn · 2004-02-11, 05:30 AM

What DD said.

That's about the size thumbs I use. If it were me I would make 4 rows of 4. 16 pic total. That number and layout will help getting listed as well.

MrMaryLou · 2004-02-11, 10:34 AM

Way too wide

Ramster · 2004-02-11, 11:00 AM

All above mentioned. Especially text to try to sell the surfer more. Also, non-series photos do not get accepted a lot out there. Meaning it should be the same girl in all photos if at all possible.

JustAnotherDude · 2004-02-11, 09:38 PM

Thanks guys. Not my content, so there's not a whole lot I can do (this is more for practice and just to get some stuff up than a serious draw), but I'll make those improvements.

JustAnotherDude · 2004-02-13, 11:38 PM

Alright, changes made. Link is the same. How's it look?

Surfn · 2004-02-14, 04:18 AM

The layout looks fine to me.

You need to do better with your sales text. Think of the biggest tease you have ever known, now put your text links in their words.

JustAnotherDude · 2004-02-14, 04:20 AM

Biggest tease I've ever known? I think she'd object to me mentioning her by name....

OOOOOOOH!

Surfn · 2004-02-14, 04:36 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by JustAnotherDude
Biggest tease I've ever known? I think she'd object to me mentioning her by name....

OOOOOOOH!

Thanks, but I'm not really interested in meeting her. However, the easiest girl you ever met is another story. lol

2004-02-11, 12:26 AM	#1
JustAnotherDude Are you sure you're an accredited and honored pornographer? Join Date: Feb 2004 Posts: 68	How'm I Doin' Part 2: My First Gallery I appreciated the first round so much and since I'm new, thought I'd bug you a bit more. Here is my first gallery (free content from that sponsor). How's it look? Am I on the right track, way off, somewhere in between? Jesus thanks you:

2004-02-11, 01:39 AM	#2
DangerDave Bonged Join Date: Mar 2003 Location: BrisVegas, AUSTRALIA Posts: 4,882	JustAnotherDude hmm a couple of problems with that one... Pics open in new windows.. most places dont allow that. Your table/thumbs are too wide... at 1024x768 you gallery scrolls off the side of my monitor.. that will get rejected to You gallery lacks SELL! you need more text in there enticing the surfer to BUY... The linked "I luv Blowjobs" header will get you declined in a few places too So its a decent start... just needs some tweaking DD __________________ Old Dollars >>>> Now with over 90 Hosted Free Sites <<<< DangerDave.com.au - Adult Links to Free Porn

2004-02-11, 10:34 AM	#4
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2004-02-11, 11:00 AM	#5
Ramster Life is good Join Date: Apr 2003 Location: Ottawa, Canada Posts: 11,867	All above mentioned. Especially text to try to sell the surfer more. Also, non-series photos do not get accepted a lot out there. Meaning it should be the same girl in all photos if at all possible. __________________ Pornstar Legends \| Live Cam Model Shows \| Hungarian Girls Skype: robmurray999

2004-02-11, 05:30 AM	#3
Surfn If you don’t take a chance the Angels won’t dance Join Date: Aug 2003 Location: Earth on occasion Posts: 8,812	What DD said. That's about the size thumbs I use. If it were me I would make 4 rows of 4. 16 pic total. That number and layout will help getting listed as well.

2004-02-11, 09:38 PM	#6
JustAnotherDude Are you sure you're an accredited and honored pornographer? Join Date: Feb 2004 Posts: 68	Thanks guys. Not my content, so there's not a whole lot I can do (this is more for practice and just to get some stuff up than a serious draw), but I'll make those improvements.

2004-02-13, 11:38 PM	#7
JustAnotherDude Are you sure you're an accredited and honored pornographer? Join Date: Feb 2004 Posts: 68	Alright, changes made. Link is the same. How's it look?

2004-02-14, 04:18 AM	#8
Surfn If you don’t take a chance the Angels won’t dance Join Date: Aug 2003 Location: Earth on occasion Posts: 8,812	The layout looks fine to me. You need to do better with your sales text. Think of the biggest tease you have ever known, now put your text links in their words.

2004-02-14, 04:20 AM	#9
JustAnotherDude Are you sure you're an accredited and honored pornographer? Join Date: Feb 2004 Posts: 68	Biggest tease I've ever known? I think she'd object to me mentioning her by name.... OOOOOOOH!