My First Free Site! Please Come And tell me what you think about it :D

[guti]

Hi!!
This is my first free site:
Babes_anal_pleasure

please if you can tell me:
do you think something is wrong?
do you think that all the recips i put will accept me?
is the domain ok?
what you think about the design?
is there any way i can make it better?
is it ok for a anal freesite? or it should have diferent colors/design/etc ?
the banners?

Thanks SO much for your support and help

[Cleo]

Took a quick look...
Looks decent but you have your ads opening in a new window and most places don't allow anything to open new windows.

[guti]

Thanks so much Cleo!, I will do my best to fix that, i dint know they did.
Edit: Fixed !

[Lemmy]

I think the fact that you're using a freehost will be a problem.

[Cleo]

Also sub-domains tend not to be accepted.

[guti]

so by now the problems would be about the hosting.. the fact is that i dont have any credit card and this free hosting maybe will make my first sale so i can buy a domain / host... what you think i should do?

thanks so much again! you are helping me so much thx!

[ronnie]

Much of the text is a little too big, almost overwhelming. The colors are awful bright, could distract from your ads. Your ads, those types of banners won't pull crap for clicks, you'd be wasting your time if you made sites like that, very little would get to the sponsor to buy. That type and size of banner hasn't pulled clicks for a long time now.

As said the hosting and sub domains will cause you trouble getting listed. Do you have a debit card, they usually work like a credit card. Also some hosts use to take mail in payments, unless your overseas.

[secretagentwilly]

Guti, I'm not a major player in the XXX world, but I have a few tips for you...first one is get a real host...maybe even a reseller account if you intend to add more sites...a reseller account will enable you to have better control over each site and it's only like $20 a month for UNLIMITED domains...maybe even cheaper...the real charge will be in domain names...PM me if you need some good referrals...comments about your sites would be one main one which is why would you have ads for Ebony sites on galleries with white chicks? A basic concept would be for you to have ads that match the content because you figure the person is even entertaining the site because they see something they like...but then try to sell them the opposite is not productive...just my opinion...food for thought and something to consider...

[guti]

ronnie:
Thanks SO much man, i will make my freesite again, much more effort and time, but as you said, i know i have to do it if i want to sell something, thats te idea.
About the hosting... My banners are so bad because i picked them from the free hosting company wich is spacash, they have those ugly banners, and they dont have any banners with white girls that suit my site (thats so ...)
easymama:
Thanks you too man, your advise is wise, the banners as what i'm pretending to sell, should be the same category that the site, but i couldn't find any banner that suit those Galleries in the sponsor, i choose that sponsor because of the free host...
i dont have those $20, i mean i have them, but no way to pay them, no credit card and i'm far away...

[secretagentwilly]

Where you at? Sign up for bangbros or nastydollars which convert real well and give you free hosting for THEIR galleries... or some other affiliate program that pays out via epassporte...epassporte is a visa card and a good deal. Then get a site and have it paid automatically when billing is due, once you start making sales. You gotta get away from that free stuff...you have to bluff your professionalism the best you can when your resources are limited.. =) best of luck to you...

[guti]

Thanks again easymama!
so your advise is to start making some money with galleries then come back to freesites?
Thats true, the professionalism, is the key, i will do my best.
Good luck you too!!

Here is the update with some of the changes that ronnie suggested:
Babes_anal_pleasure

Thanks Again guys! you are helping me so much!
i keep working on it...

[stfuvt]

your free site looks fine for me, but you really need to get real host.
Good Luck

[guti]

i really need a host, but i have no idea of how to buy one now... well here is another freesite i made:
Teeny_Love_It_Deeply
Would you mind telling me what you think about it, and if you think it will be accepted in those LL?

Thanks so much !

[Licker4U]

[quote=guti;351882]Teeny_Love_It_Deeply

On the index page: Quite a few grammatical errors. "Cum inside and feel those anus for yourself" should be "Cum inside and feel this anus for yourself"

"This brown beauties just love a cock in their anus..." should be "These brown beauties..."

"myslef" should be "myself"

"They are using their anus like a pumping machine to take out that semen away" the plural for "anus" is "anuses" which sounds weird. Might say "they are using their butt holes...." Also, "to take out that semen away" Not sure on this one but it just doesn't sound right. Maybe "to take that semen away" or "to drain those cocks".

Also, any word after a period (.) needs to start with a capital letter.

Personally I wouldn't have an exit link to Google but that's just me.

Main page "Cum inside and feel those anus for yourself" should be "Cum inside and feel this anus for yourself"

I would put some text above and below the banners. Get the surfer excited. Tell him what he can get, how much there is to see, how easy it is to join, how it's better than any other anal site, and then tell him what to do. "Click Here For The Free Tour At Supreme Anal!" "Get The Three Day Trial For Only $1.00!" "Join The Anal Girls At Supreme Anal!" "Join Supreme Anal And Start Downloading in Seconds! Click Here Now!"
Something telling him what to do.

Galleries. I wouldn't put a link to gallery 2 on gallery 1. Surfer clicks back to the main page to get the link for gallery 2 he looks at your ads again. Again, more text above and below the banners. Or remove some banners and just use text. Text sells better than banners anyway. I use banners to add color to a page and to act as a divider seperating areas of the page.

Nice start, keep tweaking it!

[guti]

Licker4U:
THANKS !!! you helped me so much!

This Is a new one I made with your suggestions =>Pump_my_ass
Where can i link if its not google?

Please Tell me what you think about it

Do you think i can pull some clicks from those ads?
Do you think it will be accepted in those LL?

Thanks so much for your support and help!

[Porn Junkie]

I've noticed by the 3 or 4 sites you've posted that the layout is somewhat extremely similar. You should try to be creative, change things up a bit, make each site look different and experiment.

I did this for a while until I saw what sites were converting and which ones were not. I took those sites that did and duplicated what converted into new sites.

You'll eventually get a style of your own but one that converts for your traffic

[Slap Dot]

Just buy a domain!

[Useless]

STOP BUILDING NEW FREE SITES. It's pointless to continue producing 'new' sites until you have a real host and domain. None of the lists you have recip buttons for are going to accept any of the sites you've built thus far, unless the reviewer is asleep. Hell, they may never even open them up to look at them once they see 'gratishost' in the URL.

I'd love to sit here and pick apart your sites, your horrific use of English and how each site uses the same damn pics, but there is no point critiquing the sites themselves until you own a domain and are using an acceptable paid host.

[Licker4U]

Originally Posted by guti

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This Is a new one I made with your suggestions =>Pump_my_ass
Where can i link if its not google?

Every link should be on a page for a reason. What's the reason for having an exit link? If they want to leave your site they can hit the back button or exit the site with that little red "x" in the top right corner

Text around the banners is getting better but the english grammar is still off. All of the text doesn't have to be linked. Play around with it.

Get a paid host. You can get hosting for $5.00/month at some places. Find a friend and pay them $5.00 to put it on their credit card.

[LD]

Originally Posted by Cleo

Took a quick look...
Looks decent but you have your ads opening in a new window and most places don't allow anything to open new windows.

I have a "dumb newbie" question about this: If you download a banner from a sponsor, stick it it on a page, attach a url link to it, how do you control it if opens in a new window?

[guti]

thanks thanks thanks!
Now i have host!
these are the url of the freesites in their new host:
1) Babes_anal_pleasure
2) Teeny_Love_It_Deeply
3) Pump_my_ass

Originally Posted by Useless Warrior

I'd love to sit here and pick apart your sites, your horrific use of English and how each site uses the same damn pics, but there is no point critiquing the sites themselves until you own a domain and are using an acceptable paid host.

Please now that i have host can you critique it?
i'm really sorry for my english, is there any way i can check the grammar of the site with some software? or just english clases?
About the picks, you think i should change them in each site? or i can make some sites with the same ones? The sponsor i'm working with (spacash) doesn't have much pics to chose, that's why i'm using always the same, but please, what you suggest?

porn Junkie:
thanks for your advice! its really wise, i should be making diferent free sites, i will try to change my style from now on and explore diferent desings as you said.

Thanks you all guys for your support and advice!

would you mind telling me what you think about it? (now that i have a host! )

[Fonz]

Originally Posted by Useless Warrior

they may never even open them up to look at them once they see 'gratishost' in the URL.

I must admit I deleted a site earlier today that had the "gratishost" in it's url. Never looked at the site itself... I think it was the one his first post.

[guti]

can i submit them again with this url?
i just fixed the grammar errors i could see.
Edit: in Pump_my_ass that's the better one i think...

[Useless]

Originally Posted by guti

Please now that i have host can you critique it?

Sure. Buy a .com domain and junk that .org.

Who is your host? Your nameserver's whois appears to be the same as your domain's.

Learn, then build.

[danutzupmp]

Buy .com domain. I am from Romania and have no problem in having my own several debit cards including epassport. I can pay on internet with them. Also some ll will not accept you with text written on you gallery pics